She burns with hot flames
Under lone pitch dark blue night
Waiting for his kiss
Temptress she is of all sins
Like cool breeze he says
Tempt me enough to get one
Dear you have it all
Under lone pitch dark blue night
Waiting for his kiss
Temptress she is of all sins
Like cool breeze he says
Tempt me enough to get one
Dear you have it all
33 comments:
awesome sweetie.. very seductive..
ooh laa laa..
someone is churning out some real passionate stuff :P
good one mate..
take care..
cheers...
@ angel-
thank u dear:)
@ Arv-
thank u dear..hope to see ur posts soon :)
Very passionate. Nicely done.
Beautifull and veryyy romantic...:)
Keep going..:)
@ anthonynorth-
thank u :)
@ Pramoda Meduri-
thank u dear:)
Sensual, erotic play of images!
Oooo sexy!
You always find the right kind of pic :)
@ Greyscale Territory-
thank u dear:)
@ Sugar Cube-
thank u dear he he...:)..i always ask leo to help me out with pics:)...thanks to him too :)
sighhhh!!!
and this is for the sinful signorita :D
me me me :D
lovely!
Sensual and passionate...lovely!
@ Americanising Desi-
he he...:)thank u dear:)
Woww So Sweet :D Dear, Thanks A Lot For Changes made..its very clearly visible now :D even, Touch Poem Is Also Awesome :D
Thanks A Lot For Sharing :D
@ Sweetest in the Gale-
thank u dear:)
Very sensual, but tastefully written.
Yvonne.
passionate blogger with a passionate poem! :)
sensual, and beautifully written!
temptress... enticing title! :D
@ Yvonne-
thank u dear
@ Leo-
THANK U DEAR:)
really sensual and passionate... ood work :)
@ lena-
THANK U DEAR:)
temptress indeed- just that word, that title makes one lean in.
she has it all,,,,
This is a sensual piece...I smiled at the last lines. Also, that photo compliments your poem well. Beautifully done.
@ Tammie Lee-
yaa indeed she had it all...:)..succeeded in tempting:)..he he...thank u dear:)
@The Write Girl-
thank u dear:)..welcome:)..glad u liked it:)..hope to see u again:)...
Wow..very passionate Dear ..:)
Short and hot ;)
@ Vyshu-
thank u dear:)..
@ Deepika-
thank u dear:)
hmm......someone is burning with the passion to write and coming out with the beautiful flames....good..!!!
@ yamini -
yaa... thank u:)...he he
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