Monday, August 31, 2009

Temptress


She burns with hot flames
Under lone pitch dark blue night
Waiting for his kiss
Temptress she is of all sins
Like cool breeze he says
Tempt me enough to get one
Dear you have it all

33 comments:

angel said...

awesome sweetie.. very seductive..

Arv said...

ooh laa laa..

someone is churning out some real passionate stuff :P

good one mate..

take care..

cheers...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ angel-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Arv-
thank u dear..hope to see ur posts soon :)

anthonynorth said...

Very passionate. Nicely done.

Pramoda Meduri said...

Beautifull and veryyy romantic...:)

Keep going..:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ anthonynorth-

thank u :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda Meduri-

thank u dear:)

Greyscale Territory said...

Sensual, erotic play of images!

- Sugar Cube - said...

Oooo sexy!

You always find the right kind of pic :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Greyscale Territory-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sugar Cube-

thank u dear he he...:)..i always ask leo to help me out with pics:)...thanks to him too :)

Americanising Desi said...

sighhhh!!!

and this is for the sinful signorita :D

me me me :D

lovely!

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Sensual and passionate...lovely!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi-

he he...:)thank u dear:)

Creativity!! said...

Woww So Sweet :D Dear, Thanks A Lot For Changes made..its very clearly visible now :D even, Touch Poem Is Also Awesome :D

Thanks A Lot For Sharing :D

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sweetest in the Gale-

thank u dear:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Very sensual, but tastefully written.



Yvonne.

Leo said...

passionate blogger with a passionate poem! :)

sensual, and beautifully written!

temptress... enticing title! :D

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo-
THANK U DEAR:)

lena said...

really sensual and passionate... ood work :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ lena-

THANK U DEAR:)

Tammie Lee said...

temptress indeed- just that word, that title makes one lean in.
she has it all,,,,

The Write Girl said...

This is a sensual piece...I smiled at the last lines. Also, that photo compliments your poem well. Beautifully done.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Tammie Lee-

yaa indeed she had it all...:)..succeeded in tempting:)..he he...thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@The Write Girl-

thank u dear:)..welcome:)..glad u liked it:)..hope to see u again:)...

Vyshu said...

Wow..very passionate Dear ..:)

Deepika said...

Short and hot ;)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vyshu-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Deepika-

thank u dear:)

yamini meduri said...

hmm......someone is burning with the passion to write and coming out with the beautiful flames....good..!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ yamini -

yaa... thank u:)...he he

 
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