Sunday, August 9, 2009

Yellow Tulip


Poem
Yellow tulip
Antediluvian
Hemidemisemiquaver
No end

14 comments:

Leo said...

i actually at first didn't follow this cinquain! but after u told me, i was able to follow it! :)

nicely written!

Yellow Tulip said...

hmm thank u:)....it was an experiment:)...

Leo said...

ps: u forgot to put a title for it! :)

do so soon! :)

Yellow Tulip said...

yaa jus saw:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

thank u:)...

Pramoda Meduri said...

Hello..:)

Nice blog..:) and good poems of feelings..:) keep it up ..

Yellow Tulip said...

thank u dear...:)..

Arv said...

complex form so skillfully done :)

nice one mate :)

lena said...

wow, that was really a masterwork.. beautifully done :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Arv: thank you dude...this actually was playing with syllable!!

@lena: thank u dear:)...

Vyshu said...

I read twice to understand it..:)

Masterpiece Dear ..!

Greyscale Territory said...

No end to the note
Deep unfinished symphony
Tulip enigma

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vyshu-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Greyscale Territory -

thank u dear:)..excellent haiku:)...thank u:)

 
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