Sunday, August 9, 2009

Yellow Tulip


Poem
 Yellow tulip
 Antediluvian
 Hemidemisemiquaver
 No end
Posted By Yellow Tulip at 11:45 AM

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

i actually at first didn't follow this cinquain! but after u told me, i was able to follow it! :)

nicely written!

August 9, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Yellow Tulip said...

hmm thank u:)....it was an experiment:)...

August 9, 2009 at 12:04 PM
Anonymous said...

ps: u forgot to put a title for it! :)

do so soon! :)

August 9, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Yellow Tulip said...

yaa jus saw:)...

August 9, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Yellow Tulip said...

thank u:)...

August 9, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Pramoda Meduri said...

Hello..:)

Nice blog..:) and good poems of feelings..:) keep it up ..

August 9, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Yellow Tulip said...

thank u dear...:)..

August 9, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Arv said...

complex form so skillfully done :)

nice one mate :)

August 10, 2009 at 12:31 PM
lena said...

wow, that was really a masterwork.. beautifully done :)

August 10, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Yellow Tulip said...

@Arv: thank you dude...this actually was playing with syllable!!

@lena: thank u dear:)...

August 10, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Anonymous said...

I read twice to understand it..:)

Masterpiece Dear ..!

September 5, 2009 at 12:55 AM
Gemma Wiseman said...

No end to the note
Deep unfinished symphony
Tulip enigma

September 5, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vyshu-

thank u dear:)..

September 5, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Yellow Tulip said...

@Greyscale Territory -

thank u dear:)..excellent haiku:)...thank u:)

September 5, 2009 at 10:22 AM

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