Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Goodbye my Lover


In all these decades
I poured my heart out
One day you cry out
I lost trust and love
Goodbye my lover

26 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

I could feel the heartache in those words.


Yvonne,

freelancer said...

I am still here hon
Don't give up on me
I am just waylaid
Search for my heartbeats
My love..i love you

reasonsoflife said...

well... don't be disheartened...
losing trust hurts a lot... I'm too a sufferer... It pains for while...seems a void in heart...but as it is said time is the best medicine in these cases...u'll soon overcome it...

-anujjha

reasonsoflife said...

There's a more comment
it seems u are lover of "Anime"

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

aww :(

Nadege said...

wow. miss tulip, this is where
i am right now. your articulation
is succinct & honest.

Pramoda Meduri said...

Sooo touching..:)

PS: is it about ut current situation? if yes, please take some time before u decide.

Creativity!! said...

Extremely Heart Touching Post Dear :D Take Care :D Wish You All The Very Best Success :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ freelancer -

Your sweet talks I doubt
Your heart beats are low
But still hope your true
I want to be blind
Hopelessly in love

Yellow Tulip said...

@ anujjha -

thank u dear:)...time is wat we never have:(...not all get second chances right

Yellow Tulip said...

@ anujjha

he he...yaa dear:)..hmm kind of..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com -

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nadege-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda Meduri-

those are running thoughts dear..:)..thank u :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Creativity!!-

thank u dear:)..

pinkZz said...

sad .. :(

Yellow Tulip said...

@ pinkzz

sorry dear:)..hmm next time jus to cheer u up will post happy one:)...

Americanising Desi said...

you bring my heart to its beats.
you always know what to say and say that touches me :)

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

the words said it all..

Rane

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Very touching. Keep penning.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi -

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink)-
thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ ~*~ Jal Pari ~*~

sure dear..hope to see u more:)..enjoy

Leo said...

u write so well.. i think now, my comments are really not needed! u got such a fanfare to push u to greater heights! :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ leo-

u better not stop commenting he he:)..
thank u dear..:)..i still like to read ur opinions:)

 
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