Thursday, August 20, 2009

Angel's Silent Cries


None heard
Her silent cries
No tears from eyes do come
With heart sealed in broken coffin
She weeps

Angel
She was of cheers
Once smile brought dead alive
Alone she waits in lonely night
For death

Her soul
Draining and lost
Lay there so inviting
For hungry beasts and lonely wolves
To feed

Mercy
None she will get
Lying now in graveyard
No pain she feels with broken wings
She bleeds

What next
She wonders now
Is she sent to hell or
Will heaven take her in again?
With love

22 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A splendid write, most pleasurable to read.

Yvonne.

Pramoda Meduri said...

good one ...hey a very nice template ...
;)

Vyshu said...

Classic template..i loved it..:)

Your poem is a nice read ..!

Cheers

yamini meduri said...

Pain of the angel very well expressed....though it was a painful read....loved the pain..!!!

beautifully expressed friend..!!

Keep writing...!!!

good wishes..!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne.

hank u dear...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda Meduri -

thank u dear:)..leo helped me out choosing this:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vyshu -

thank u dear:)...cheers:)

Yellow Tulip said...

yamini meduri -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Anu...:) said...

Nice poem...touching...:)

Escapist said...

Hiya !
You write worth ful of reading !

jolliieess:-)

Americanising Desi said...

i think if heaven wudnt take her, then there is no her that will reamin :(

sounds like an ode for me :(

yes i m just gloomy!

Yellow Tulip said...

Anu...:) -
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

Escapist -
thank u:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

Americanising Desi -
my sentiments exactly dear:(...hope she finds her way back to where she belongs....

Leo said...

a crown cinquain with the flow is difficult to write at times. you did it with ease..! :)

nicely done Nan :)

Yellow Tulip said...

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

angel said...

beautiful sweetie... really nice

Yellow Tulip said...

thank u sweetie:)...he he

Princess Sonshu said...

Pain of the angel was described so well that i felt it, well written, a wonderful piece!

Yellow Tulip said...

thank u princess:)...

i'll write somethin cheerful next time:)...jus to cheer u up:)..thank u:)

safa said...

lovely soo meaningful...and the words are simply fantabulous..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ safa -

thank u dear:)

 
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