None heard
Her silent cries
No tears from eyes do come
With heart sealed in broken coffin
She weeps
Angel
She was of cheers
Once smile brought dead alive
Alone she waits in lonely night
For death
Her soul
Draining and lost
Lay there so inviting
For hungry beasts and lonely wolves
To feed
Mercy
None she will get
Lying now in graveyard
No pain she feels with broken wings
She bleeds
What next
She wonders now
Is she sent to hell or
Will heaven take her in again?
With love
Her silent cries
No tears from eyes do come
With heart sealed in broken coffin
She weeps
Angel
She was of cheers
Once smile brought dead alive
Alone she waits in lonely night
For death
Her soul
Draining and lost
Lay there so inviting
For hungry beasts and lonely wolves
To feed
Mercy
None she will get
Lying now in graveyard
No pain she feels with broken wings
She bleeds
What next
She wonders now
Is she sent to hell or
Will heaven take her in again?
With love
22 comments:
A splendid write, most pleasurable to read.
Yvonne.
good one ...hey a very nice template ...
;)
Classic template..i loved it..:)
Your poem is a nice read ..!
Cheers
Pain of the angel very well expressed....though it was a painful read....loved the pain..!!!
beautifully expressed friend..!!
Keep writing...!!!
good wishes..!!!
@ Yvonne.
hank u dear...glad u liked it:)
@ Pramoda Meduri -
thank u dear:)..leo helped me out choosing this:)
@ Vyshu -
thank u dear:)...cheers:)
yamini meduri -
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
Nice poem...touching...:)
Hiya !
You write worth ful of reading !
jolliieess:-)
i think if heaven wudnt take her, then there is no her that will reamin :(
sounds like an ode for me :(
yes i m just gloomy!
Anu...:) -
thank u dear:)
Escapist -
thank u:)...glad u liked it:)
Americanising Desi -
my sentiments exactly dear:(...hope she finds her way back to where she belongs....
a crown cinquain with the flow is difficult to write at times. you did it with ease..! :)
nicely done Nan :)
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
beautiful sweetie... really nice
thank u sweetie:)...he he
Pain of the angel was described so well that i felt it, well written, a wonderful piece!
thank u princess:)...
i'll write somethin cheerful next time:)...jus to cheer u up:)..thank u:)
lovely soo meaningful...and the words are simply fantabulous..
@ safa -
thank u dear:)
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