You are not the dream I chase every night
Not really my prince or charming knight..
Time passed so soon like a flash of light
Blind I was not but had short sight..
Wish I have today is not quite right
Rhymes I pour so here I write..
I hold your hands and see through your sight
Life seems simple with hopes so bright..
You are my dear who showed me love in fight
The one who showed to dream with delight..
Only if I had known you were my light
Instead of maybes would have held you tight..
P.S: started this with a sad note...but ended with a cute smile..thank u:)..
sometimes feelings are jus tat...feel it even if its just not right!!...
28 comments:
I agree with you about feelings. They do their own thing.
hmmm.. i like it dear, the message, the thought, the rhymes? everything in it!
real or fiction?
have a nice day...:)
i agree dear..
we generally feel sometimes even thy are nt just rght ..:) loved the poem and cuteeeeee pic..:)
@ SandyCarlson-
yaa:)...thank u dear:)
@ Amity Me-
thank u dear:)..if feelings are true then i guess it is:)...
@ Pramoda-
thank u dear:)...yaa this pic reflects my smile!!... he he:)...
the picture is soo cute! it tells the story the poem does. love everything!!
i like it. honest and nanlike! :)
monorhyme form is nice too! good work!
Woww :) :) Beautiful Lines Dear :) :) Extremely Very Well Written :) :)
@ Wana-
thank u dear:)
@ Leo-
thank u dear:)..
@ Creativity!-
thank u dear:)..glad u liked it soo much:)
sweetly written...
i love this :)
Nice poem.
The rhymes add to the charm of your wonderful poetry.
Cheers!!
@ Aparna -
thank u dear:)
@ michellehendra-
i'm glad:)...thank u dear
@ Chatterbox-
thank u dear:)...
Feelings are funny things, one moment one is feeling sad next the opposite, loved the poem, a pleasure to read.
Yvonne.
@ Yvonne.-
thank u dear:)...ya totally agree with u:)...glad u enjoyed it:)
Yes, our feelings will run away with us. Really like the ending.
honest and true to form..
you did it again tulip
@ Amias -
thank u dear:)
@ Shraddha-
thank u dear:)
Wow, this indeed was a super rhyme.Loved the flow and the monorhyme.
Last two lines indeed made me smile..keep smiling Tulip.
what a pleasurable ride through poetry :D
i m over the moon now!
i m a rhyme person and i could easily keep swaying to this one.
love your poetry always!
@ swapnap-
thank u dear:)...keep smiling:)...glad u liked it:)
@ Americanising Desi-
thank u dear:)...n i really enjoy ur say :)...*hugs* glad u enjoyed it:)
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