Sunday, November 8, 2009

Dearly departed

Lonely I was in this crowd world
Loving this world in my own way
Not knowing the way just roaming around
I Saw all running around with no time to breath...
Holding my breath I was trying to reach
So out of reach I felt it sometimes
Someday sometime I thought I'll find my dream
Heart etched dream of someone to hold on to
Lived my life to feel it just once
Wanted it just once to belong to someone
My passionate someone who could hide me from all
My dearly departed all this came true with you my love...

52 comments:

Leo said...

ah, ur experimentations with poetry are wonderful. i've never seen this sort of a loop created! :D

ur words are sort of entrancing too! Good one Tulippy! :)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Oh My God!!
So many awards :)
Thank you so much.
I'm so glad you like my blog. You made my Sunday !!!!!
Take Care!!

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Nanditha...

very veryyy good poetry..thank you soo much for sharing this..:)

wonderful i must say..:)

ScarletTd1ar1es said...

very delicately knitted. the overall effect was mesmerising to say the least.

- Sugar Cube - said...

Love the last 4 lines :)

Nice poem

gautami tripathy said...

Full of emotions and feelings..

a winter tale

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

that is very sensitive and serene poem..

thank you

Amity Me said...

wow...what an innovative way of writing a poem?

and the message is so touching!

well done, Yellow Tulip!!!

good evening!

:)

SandyCarlson said...

A beautiful poem to a soul mate.

Americanising Desi said...

what you write you perfect it. you touch a chord and strike a fire :D
mwah

Loch Rob said...

Very nicely done. A passionate letter to that special loved one.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

This was beautiful...I could feel the love. And I loved what you did with the word patterns -- so clever!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Excellent poetry, such a pleasure to read.

Yvonne.

The Write Girl said...

What a heartfelt poem written in the remembrance and spirit of love.

Ria said...

wow that was lovely and touching...

Rohit said...

nice lines indeed! read through some of your posts in the first page..you've got a nice blog going here..

Tumblewords: said...

Nice lines and touching thoughts...

Jukota said...

this is indeed an interesting form. Took a lot of thought.

Arv said...

Awesome stuff... as Leo said... the bar has been raised... :)

take care dear...

cheers...

HaRy!! said...

oh that someone feel !!!!! cant beat it can it?

Kathiesbirds said...

How wonderful to feel that connected!

ܔܢܜܔKrAzY KoMpLeX KiTtEn(๏̯͡๏) : said...

hey a beautiful poem...lovd it a lot.. :) ....

Jim said...

Hi Ms. Tulip, this is a nice tribute to 'her' life's love. I like your retrospect and progression like a life saga.
..
I came to your Ruby Tuesday (other blog). That is a nice and very pretty tribute to veterans. But there was a problem, something wanted to open Adobe ???? and my computer had troubles with it.
Happy RT (belated). Thank you for looking in at mine.
..

aaron said...

Hey i finally gave a visit to your blog. Its simply great!! i dint expect it to be so nice. its good !!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo-
thank u leo:)...coming from u its a pleasure:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Cursed♪♫-

thank u dear:)...u deserve it all:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda.-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ ScarletTd1ar1es -

thank u dear:)....glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sugar Cube-

thank u :)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ gautami tripathy-

yaa:)..thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shraddha-

thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity Me-

thank u dear:)..yaa jus was experimenting:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi -

thank u sweets:)..me still learning:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Loch Rob-

thank u :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sweetest in the Gale-

thank u dear:)..yaa was jus trying somethin different:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ The Write Girl -

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Rohit -

thank u:)...glad u liked it:)...hope to see u more:)..enjoy ur stay:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Tumblewords-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jukota -

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Arv-

thank u dear:)...u back?:)...glad to hear from u:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ HaRy-

NOPE:)...never!!:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Kathiesbirds-

yaa:)...very rare these days:)...but i'm glad it still exists:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@KrAzY KoMpLeX KiTtEn-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jim-

thank u sir:)...glad u liked it:)...

sorry about the other blog u said. i have no clue about tat..i have maintained only one:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ aaron-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

roshwrites said...

cool! new style huh :) btw thanks for all the awards on the last post, happy 50th!

swapnap said...

Very creative indeed, enjoyed reading this one.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ roshwrites-

thank u dear:)...ya was just trying:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ swapnap-

thank u dear:)

 
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