Sunday, November 15, 2009

DEPARTED

Deeply
Entangled we
Parted
Avenging
Raped of
Trust
Eloped..
Deceiving

32 comments:

Amias said...

A very good acrostic ... and how truthful, when one depart all of these emotions are evoked.

Nadege said...

beautiful, sad & perfect miss tulip.

Leo said...

sad one Nan..
very nicely written though..

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A most emotional acrostic words so very true,

Yvonne.

Raj said...

ow...someones hurting big tym. :(
wonderfully composed

Being Pramoda... said...

well done dear..:)

GIANTS FAN said...

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Ria said...

Ouch!!tht hurts for sure...

Shruti said...

Sad one... as usual you wrote it beautifully!! Busy these days? Hey check out my post, i have tried a poem... its pathetic only, but still i would like to have ur expert opinion!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amias-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nadege -

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo -

thank u leo:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Raj-

:)..thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda.-

thank u sweetie:)*hugs*

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jason-

thank u sir:)..welcome:)...hope u enjoy the stay:)...n about the thing u said:)...it sounds cool:)..only prob is i'm not sure of hw to do tat!!:(..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

hmmm:)..yaa.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shruti -

thank u dear:)...yaa :(..sadly this week i'm out of town soo little hard to come online:(...tryin my best to be here though:)...surely will do that dear:)..i'm no expert:)...jus a learner yet:)...but i love ur work:)..definitely will do tat:)

Amity Me said...

what a sad note...:)

you always write in a sad tone, are you?

miss yah!

Karthik said...

Where is the "Like" button here? :) Lovely!

Americanising Desi said...

it hurts but it hurts with pleasure and yes i m become so cynical now. what is wrong with me.

kher this is brilliant and full stop :)

Jaunty anima said...

Commmendable job gal...:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity Me -

yaa dear:)...kind of :)..thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Karthik -

thank u dear...no like button:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Americanising Desi -

he he...nothin sweets:)u r a gem..thank u:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jaunty anima -

thank u dear:)

Amias said...

Congratulations! You won Best Monthly Acrostic.. Scan down to find your poem!

Jim said...

Congratulations on the nice award! You surely deserved it with this one!

They say that parting is sweet sorrow but I don't believe it one bit. Not the various ways in which most of us get involved.

That hurt never goes away, I have been there.
..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias-

wowww...thank u dear:)...its an honour:)..i'll collect it tonight thanku again:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jim -

thank u jim:)...yaa i know..it hurts a lot...:(...

Amias said...

I like the changes, very clean and still very creative.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias-

thank u dear:)...

 
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