Sunday, November 1, 2009

Feel with shift in time


Forgive I did long ago…
Forget I’m not able to do…
Feelings again with shift in time
Fading away with memories like crime…

Eager my heart to let go of pain…
Exhaustive mind says ready again?
Enchanted moments we did share…
Endless dream it was but I did care…

End it has now bitterly…
Each time I wonder achingly…
Engulfing pride from nowhere now…
Entrapped me from you and your broken vow…

Looking back I see I should have known…
Losing trust now I doubt was it your hormone…
Left with doubts and feelings unkind…
Lots of questions still pondering my mind…

52 comments:

Leo said...

yes, forgiving is easy, forgetting that memories arent possible easily. not even with the shift in time! :)

well said Nan!

spacedlaw said...

A painful worrying.
Nice.

- Sugar Cube - said...

Wow :)

gautami tripathy said...

You have done that acrostic thing well in each stanza.

deathly adventure

Amias said...

I thought to myself, what a very unique way of writing an acrostic!

Funny, how pain inspires us to write such wonderful poems. Such a paradox, to say the least.


Join the fun at Acrostic Only!

Creativity!! said...

Wowwwwww :) :) Beautiful Lines Dear :) :)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Beautiful soul searching poem.


Yvonne.

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Nanditha...

excellent rhyming and lovelyy emotions..:)

u r the one good user of words..:) I admire it .. keep going ..

Amity Me said...

seems you're hurting dear...:)

move on, there's no use crying over spilled milk..:)

but i like your take on the prompt, each to his own really!

thanks for sharing your thoughts on mine, too!

swapnap said...

FFFFEEELLLL was real good.It should be the hormone, am almost sure :)

Take Care.

SandyCarlson said...

Our memories make for the shift, or we would live in an eternal present and learn nothing. The looking back is the learning.

Escapist said...

Yap ! Trust is a big achievement for a person and very hard to gain it back...beautifully explained...


Jolieess:-)

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Feel...yes, I felt such emotion in this poem. So cleverly and powerfully written! Lovely.

Jukota said...

How often our mind goes back to "I should have known" and then once you do, it is never ever the same again. Talk about a shift! Nice job1

Maggie said...

This shift in mind caused a shift in time.

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

very creative and intelligent!!

great work..

Ria said...

thats the whole reason why i can forgive but can never forget.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo-

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ spacedlaw -

he he:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sugar Cube-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ gautami -

thank u dear..jus was trying somethin different..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amias-

thank u dear..my sentiments exactly,,...:)

thank u for inviting:)...surely will try tat:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Creativity-

THank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda-

thank u very much dear..:)..i'm still learning:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity Me-

thank u dear:)..living each moment is wat i do:)..not hurting much dear:)..its jus the feel tats all:)...

my pleasure dear:)...loved ur work:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ swapnap-

feel it is indeed!!...but i totally agree with u :)..

thank u dear:)..take care:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ SandyCarlson-

so true dear:)..loved ur words:)...thank u very much:)...as long as it doesn't become a lesson tat wish to happen again, to relive wat we lived its good to learn i think:)...thank u very much:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Escapist-

very hard true but its not impossible dear..if the bond is strong nothin can break the trust..:)....thank u dear..but yaa in this case of fiction its lost forever for sure:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sweetest in the Gale-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jukota-

yaa soo true...:)...thank u dear:)...hope to see u more:)...enjoy ur read:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Maggie-

yaa:)...thank u dear:)..hope u enjoyed ur read:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shraddha-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

hmm sailin in the same boat dear...:)...thank u:)

Jaunty anima said...

Luvv the acrostic there...painful,,beautiful yet..these memories..ahh!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jaunty anima-

thank u dear:)..

Nadege said...

true this. forgiving is so much
more easier that actually forgetting.

miss tulip
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Nadege said...

p.s. cool super-acrostric.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nadege-

thank u sir:)....its really an honor:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nadege-

thank u again:)...glad u liked it:)...

indicaspecies said...

These feelings are wonderfully expressed!

Tumblewords: said...

Haunting poem. Yearning and lovely.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ indicaspecies-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Tumblewords-

thank u dear:)

Aparna said...

heartbreaks are sad

very well written!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Aparna-

thank u dear:)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Great take on the prompt. and I loved your photos.

love, Melanie

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Cassiopeia Rises-

thank u:)...glad u enjoyed ur read;)

Andrée said...

How powerful! Bitter, sad, I totally understand the when your exhausted mind says "ready again?." Yet there is no resolution. Just like life. Perhaps time will resolve the forgiveness/forgetting.

meeyauw: Shift in Time

Jim said...

Your poet writer will never forget. Believe me, I've been there. And for me, I won't forgive either. It was wrong, wrong, wrong.
But time will heal over for the most. In situations like this time is a blessing.
..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Andrée-

thank u:)...very interesting view thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jim -

yaa:)..thank u:)..thank u again:)

 
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