Forgive I did long ago…
Forget I’m not able to do…
Feelings again with shift in time…
Fading away with memories like crime…
Eager my heart to let go of pain…
Exhaustive mind says ready again?
Enchanted moments we did share…
Endless dream it was but I did care…
End it has now bitterly…
Each time I wonder achingly…
Engulfing pride from nowhere now…
Entrapped me from you and your broken vow…
Looking back I see I should have known…
Losing trust now I doubt was it your hormone…
Left with doubts and feelings unkind…
Lots of questions still pondering my mind…
Forget I’m not able to do…
Feelings again with shift in time…
Fading away with memories like crime…
Eager my heart to let go of pain…
Exhaustive mind says ready again?
Enchanted moments we did share…
Endless dream it was but I did care…
End it has now bitterly…
Each time I wonder achingly…
Engulfing pride from nowhere now…
Entrapped me from you and your broken vow…
Looking back I see I should have known…
Losing trust now I doubt was it your hormone…
Left with doubts and feelings unkind…
Lots of questions still pondering my mind…
52 comments:
yes, forgiving is easy, forgetting that memories arent possible easily. not even with the shift in time! :)
well said Nan!
A painful worrying.
Nice.
Wow :)
You have done that acrostic thing well in each stanza.
deathly adventure
I thought to myself, what a very unique way of writing an acrostic!
Funny, how pain inspires us to write such wonderful poems. Such a paradox, to say the least.
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Wowwwwww :) :) Beautiful Lines Dear :) :)
Beautiful soul searching poem.
Yvonne.
hi Nanditha...
excellent rhyming and lovelyy emotions..:)
u r the one good user of words..:) I admire it .. keep going ..
seems you're hurting dear...:)
move on, there's no use crying over spilled milk..:)
but i like your take on the prompt, each to his own really!
thanks for sharing your thoughts on mine, too!
FFFFEEELLLL was real good.It should be the hormone, am almost sure :)
Take Care.
Our memories make for the shift, or we would live in an eternal present and learn nothing. The looking back is the learning.
Yap ! Trust is a big achievement for a person and very hard to gain it back...beautifully explained...
Jolieess:-)
Feel...yes, I felt such emotion in this poem. So cleverly and powerfully written! Lovely.
How often our mind goes back to "I should have known" and then once you do, it is never ever the same again. Talk about a shift! Nice job1
This shift in mind caused a shift in time.
very creative and intelligent!!
great work..
thats the whole reason why i can forgive but can never forget.
@ Leo-
thank u dear:)...
@ spacedlaw -
he he:)...thank u:)
@ Sugar Cube-
thank u dear:)
@ gautami -
thank u dear..jus was trying somethin different..
@ Amias-
thank u dear..my sentiments exactly,,...:)
thank u for inviting:)...surely will try tat:)
@ Creativity-
THank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
@ Yvonne-
thank u dear:)
@ Pramoda-
thank u very much dear..:)..i'm still learning:)
@ Amity Me-
thank u dear:)..living each moment is wat i do:)..not hurting much dear:)..its jus the feel tats all:)...
my pleasure dear:)...loved ur work:)
@ swapnap-
feel it is indeed!!...but i totally agree with u :)..
thank u dear:)..take care:)
@ SandyCarlson-
so true dear:)..loved ur words:)...thank u very much:)...as long as it doesn't become a lesson tat wish to happen again, to relive wat we lived its good to learn i think:)...thank u very much:)
@ Escapist-
very hard true but its not impossible dear..if the bond is strong nothin can break the trust..:)....thank u dear..but yaa in this case of fiction its lost forever for sure:)
@ Sweetest in the Gale-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
@ Jukota-
yaa soo true...:)...thank u dear:)...hope to see u more:)...enjoy ur read:)
@ Maggie-
yaa:)...thank u dear:)..hope u enjoyed ur read:)
@ Shraddha-
thank u dear:)
@ Ria-
hmm sailin in the same boat dear...:)...thank u:)
Luvv the acrostic there...painful,,beautiful yet..these memories..ahh!!
@ Jaunty anima-
thank u dear:)..
true this. forgiving is so much
more easier that actually forgetting.
miss tulip
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p.s. cool super-acrostric.
@ Nadege-
thank u sir:)....its really an honor:)...
@ Nadege-
thank u again:)...glad u liked it:)...
These feelings are wonderfully expressed!
Haunting poem. Yearning and lovely.
@ indicaspecies-
thank u dear:)
@ Tumblewords-
thank u dear:)
heartbreaks are sad
very well written!
@ Aparna-
thank u dear:)
Great take on the prompt. and I loved your photos.
love, Melanie
@ Cassiopeia Rises-
thank u:)...glad u enjoyed ur read;)
How powerful! Bitter, sad, I totally understand the when your exhausted mind says "ready again?." Yet there is no resolution. Just like life. Perhaps time will resolve the forgiveness/forgetting.
meeyauw: Shift in Time
Your poet writer will never forget. Believe me, I've been there. And for me, I won't forgive either. It was wrong, wrong, wrong.
But time will heal over for the most. In situations like this time is a blessing.
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@ Andrée-
thank u:)...very interesting view thank u:)
@ Jim -
yaa:)..thank u:)..thank u again:)
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