Lonely I was in this crowd worldLoving this world in my own way
Not knowing the way just roaming around
I Saw all running around with no time to breath...
Holding my breath I was trying to reach
So out of reach I felt it sometimes
Someday sometime I thought I'll find my dream
Heart etched dream of someone to hold on to
Lived my life to feel it just once
Wanted it just once to belong to someone
My passionate someone who could hide me from all
My dearly departed all this came true with you my love...
Not knowing the way just roaming around
I Saw all running around with no time to breath...
Holding my breath I was trying to reach
So out of reach I felt it sometimes
Someday sometime I thought I'll find my dream
Heart etched dream of someone to hold on to
Lived my life to feel it just once
Wanted it just once to belong to someone
My passionate someone who could hide me from all
My dearly departed all this came true with you my love...
51 comments:
ah, ur experimentations with poetry are wonderful. i've never seen this sort of a loop created! :D
ur words are sort of entrancing too! Good one Tulippy! :)
Oh My God!!
So many awards :)
Thank you so much.
I'm so glad you like my blog. You made my Sunday !!!!!
Take Care!!
hi Nanditha...
very veryyy good poetry..thank you soo much for sharing this..:)
wonderful i must say..:)
very delicately knitted. the overall effect was mesmerising to say the least.
Love the last 4 lines :)
Nice poem
Full of emotions and feelings..
a winter tale
that is very sensitive and serene poem..
thank you
wow...what an innovative way of writing a poem?
and the message is so touching!
well done, Yellow Tulip!!!
good evening!
:)
A beautiful poem to a soul mate.
what you write you perfect it. you touch a chord and strike a fire :D
mwah
Very nicely done. A passionate letter to that special loved one.
This was beautiful...I could feel the love. And I loved what you did with the word patterns -- so clever!
Excellent poetry, such a pleasure to read.
Yvonne.
What a heartfelt poem written in the remembrance and spirit of love.
wow that was lovely and touching...
nice lines indeed! read through some of your posts in the first page..you've got a nice blog going here..
Nice lines and touching thoughts...
this is indeed an interesting form. Took a lot of thought.
Awesome stuff... as Leo said... the bar has been raised... :)
take care dear...
cheers...
oh that someone feel !!!!! cant beat it can it?
How wonderful to feel that connected!
hey a beautiful poem...lovd it a lot.. :) ....
Hi Ms. Tulip, this is a nice tribute to 'her' life's love. I like your retrospect and progression like a life saga.
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I came to your Ruby Tuesday (other blog). That is a nice and very pretty tribute to veterans. But there was a problem, something wanted to open Adobe ???? and my computer had troubles with it.
Happy RT (belated). Thank you for looking in at mine.
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Hey i finally gave a visit to your blog. Its simply great!! i dint expect it to be so nice. its good !!
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sorry about the other blog u said. i have no clue about tat..i have maintained only one:)..
@ aaron-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
cool! new style huh :) btw thanks for all the awards on the last post, happy 50th!
Very creative indeed, enjoyed reading this one.
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thank u dear:)...ya was just trying:)
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