Shouting with joy
Happy new year
On i go.
Trying to shoot my
Inside turmoils called
Nervousness but then
Treacherous regrets are
Hiding from me like
Endless darkness but here
Deep down there is
An enormous faith
Raising so bright
Killing with one shot.
PS: Happy new year to all:)
Happy new year
On i go.
Trying to shoot my
Inside turmoils called
Nervousness but then
Treacherous regrets are
Hiding from me like
Endless darkness but here
Deep down there is
An enormous faith
Raising so bright
Killing with one shot.
PS: Happy new year to all:)
24 comments:
An excellent write as usual. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for all the support and comments this year. Much appreciated.
Happy New Year.
Yvonne.
nice work :)
im sorry, i didnt get wat that bright light was.. ;)
Happy New Year :)
A Very Happy New Year to u too :)
What was you shooting?
lovely!!a very happy new yr to you too!! :)
Great :) Happy new year :)
have a gr8 year ahead:)
Wish You Happy New Year :) :)
nice work dear...!!!
After a long time
I am here to read you
loved the way you wrote
love to be back more often
happy new year..!!!
@Yvonne-
happy new year to u too dear:)///thank u for the same:)..hope to see u more this year too:)
stay cool:)
@Amal Bose-
thank u dear:)...its faith to move on...made few corrections:)...i'm still learning hope u dint mind:)...thank u:)
@ An Ordinary Gal-
thank u dear:)...wish u the same
@Amias-
have made few changes...me shooting my nervousness to move on as regrets hold me back.. but its faith that is being my guiding light here... any corrections?:)
@Ria-
thank u dear:)
@roshwrites-
thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)
@Jaunty anima -
thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)
@Creativity!!-
thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)
@yamini-
thank u dear:)...have made few changes:)..thank u:)...
happy new year:)...hope to be more active this year too:)...
I hope you harness the power of that faith!
Hi Nan. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
This is a very nice acrostic. I had looked at the list but haven't done one. You are soooooo clever!
Just shoot your worries, 'in the dark(ness).' And faith will brightly rise!
I do hope you enter with the Acrostic Only. The new rules say only one entry per prompt. I think it used to be that the last one was the entry.
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Oh yes, before we enter we are supposed to read the definitions of each prompt word. Then our poem should fit the meaning of that. Mine sometimes don't as I am off-the-wall once in a while. That rule might be for me.
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@SandyCarlson-
thank u dear:)..
@Jim-
thank u:)...yaa same here:)... i have joined too. hope to write more this year:)...thank u again
hApPy nEw yEaR :) !!
@pRiYaN-
thank u:)...wish u the same:)
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