Saturday, January 2, 2010

REALITY

Racing time
Ending misery
After struggling
Living now
Illusions vaporized
Tormented soul
Yearns truth


Acrostic only

22 comments:

Amias said...

Very good Tulip!

Amias said...

By the way, your blog is locked so email your poems to acrosticonly@gmail.com or post them at the workshop. Thank you.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias-

thank u dear:)..yaa will do tat:)thank u:)

Missy said...

Nicely written

Creativity!! said...

Fabulous Dear :) :)

Yamini Meduri said...

hey dear...nice Acro..!!1

Angel said...
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Yellow Tulip said...

@ Missy-

thank u :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Creativity-

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yamini Meduri-

thank u dear:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Excellent, short but oh so good Tulip.

Yvonne.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-
thank u dear:)

Sorcerer said...

stumbled across your blog
that poem was lovely :)

Maggie said...

Reality can be hard at times.

I enjoyed the read.

darklordreturns said...

Ah, so apt for REALITY!!
Oh, and here's wishing you a magical new year ahead! Hope to read more of ur works in this year!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Sorcerer-

thank u for stoppin by:)...glad u liked irt:)...hope to see u more often thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Maggie -

THANK U DEAR:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@darklordreturns -

THANK U:)...WISH U THE SAME:)...hope to see u more here too:)...thank u:)

Mads... said...

hey a nice take dear..b'fuly penned..:)

Amity Me said...

very good take on the prompt dear!

keep on writing!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Mads-

thank u:)..glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amity Me-

thank u dear:)...

 
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