Thursday, January 7, 2010

TURN A BLIND EYE

Twisting every words
Unspoken million tears
Reasons and excuses
Neglecting tiny details

Always being there

Bound by illusions
Loosing one self
Ignoring all signs
Not accepting truth
Deceived by fake

Enchanted fantasy love
Yes! so beware
End your delusions

Acrostic Only

38 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A brilliant example of acrostic poetry, I admire people who can write these.
Lovely words.

Yvonne.

Amity Me said...

Hi Yellow Tulippy;

Now this is something to beat at AO...cheers!!!

Your works always revolve around love and anything associated with it.

I love it dear!

Saras said...

Excellent take on the Prompt, Tulip.Well done.

vidya said...

wow! that was awesome..

angel said...

hmm nice one sweetie:)

Ria said...

good one dear!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-

thank u dear:)....glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amity Me -

thank u dear:)..yaa pursuing love!!he he:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Saras -

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ vidya-

thank u:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ angel-

thank u sweetie:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

thank u dear:)

Anu...:) said...

Hey...that was really nice! :)

Amias said...

This one was right up in your face! I like it.

Missy said...

I admire the here it is, do with it what you want attitude of this piece. The plain truth is, so much is fake, enjoyed this.

Americanising Desi said...

the end!!!

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

that is awsome !

very well done!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Anu -
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Missy -

as much as i love novels and fiction sometimes i do think its major influence in such cases!!... thank u:)...appreciated ur say:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi-

trying to end!!... dellusions he sahi but still its jus a feeling!!. he he...

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shraddha-

thanku udear:)...glad u liked it;)

Shas said...

Wow! couldn't turn a blind eye to this composition of yours.

angel said...

you have been awarded in my blog :)

Pri said...

nicely summed up...i think every person needs to remember this when in love!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Shas -

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ angel-

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pri-

yep:)..tats soo true:)... thank u dear

Cassiopeia Rises said...

This is a nice one. I love your use of imagery.





Melanie

Mayz said...

very well written acrostic...

n ur blog is filled with em...u r inspirin me!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Melanie-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Mayz -

wow...tats somethin comin from u:)...thank u:)...glad u liked it:)...

Jaunty anima said...

M in no way turning a blind eye to this post....
Beautiful as always tulip!:)

Anand said...

Nanditha, that was lovely. Unfortunately, I found bad english in the poem. Sorry to be a spoilsport by telling u that. And I will not point it out to u here where ppl can read. Ill let u know only if u ask me. Feel free to delete my comment if u dont want it showing.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jaunty anima-

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Anand-

criticism is as welcomed as a coment here... never said i'm perfect:)..!!..

feel free to point out any mistake. thank u.

Little Miss Princess said...

Wow that was aweeeesome!!! nice onee! :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Little Miss Princess-

thank u dear:)

 
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