Thursday, January 21, 2010

Rhythmic Sleepless Night

Clock tics...
Mosquitoes buzz....
Leaves flutter every time breeze blows...
Water drips from an old broken rusty tap...
Shouts of vehicle's stubborn grunts...
And dog's howl like a lonely wolf...
With Cricket screaming somewhere nearby in the woods...
A sudden grumble of grudging tummy waking up an ancient fear..
Night gets scary with a moonless sky...
But like in Cinderella' tale, fairy finds her charming prince...
His token of love, a harmonious hallow wind bells...
Is set to chase her sleeplessness forever and far....
Whistling out for angels, to dust a little magic tonight...
So a little girl with courageous heart could go to sleep...
With fears locked in this rhythmic sleepless night.......

22 comments:

ANWESA said...

beautiful lines..am yet to absorb its vivacity...

Ria said...

wow...superb dear!!

Little Miss Princess said...

Beautiful!!! :) Very nicely written!!!

Creativity!! said...

Fantastic Fabulous Beautiful Lines Dear :) :)

Amity said...

I just had one like this last night, one mosquito buzzing and seems to even make my insomnia worst...

i woke up with a heavy head and i felt dizzy...

Beautifully written and i can so much relate to it!

Jaunty anima said...

Beautiful...
Rhythmic sleepless nights...*sighs*

Shas said...

Charmed n lulled into a sleep by ur poetical words.

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

very well worded :)

and finally the courageous girl did sleep and saw sweet honey dreams :)

Americanising Desi said...

what finesse :)

i love it!

spottedwolf said...

by the sleeping aged gargoyle
his quiet hooves in olive oil
breaching walls of cluttered mass and gently urging lust repast
her gate is wet under his touch
a promise guarantees so much
he warned her once to never reach
for unrepentant souls beseech
into dark places past the guard
and stain a gentle daughter hard
the ancient one you mustn't trust
or bear its name of incubus

Yellow Tulip said...

@ANWESA -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

thank u gal:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Little Miss Princess -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Creativity!-

flattered:)...thank u sweets:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity -

thank u dear...:)...may these mosq r related too i guess!!... he he:)

take care

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jaunty anima-

yaaa:)...thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shas-

glad angels heard those wind bells:)... thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ ..pAnKHuRi.-

yaa :)..Miss Sleeping Beauty nw!!

thank u

Yellow Tulip said...

@AD-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ spottedwolf-

wow...i'm dumbfound here..:)..

SandyCarlson said...

You captured it so well. Thank you.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it

 
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