Twisting every words
Unspoken million tears
Reasons and excuses
Neglecting tiny details
Always being there
Bound by illusions
Loosing one self
Ignoring all signs
Not accepting truth
Deceived by fake
Enchanted fantasy love
Yes! so beware
End your delusions
Acrostic Only
Thursday, January 7, 2010
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A brilliant example of acrostic poetry, I admire people who can write these.
Lovely words.
Yvonne.
Hi Yellow Tulippy;
Now this is something to beat at AO...cheers!!!
Your works always revolve around love and anything associated with it.
I love it dear!
Excellent take on the Prompt, Tulip.Well done.
wow! that was awesome..
hmm nice one sweetie:)
good one dear!!
@Yvonne-
thank u dear:)....glad u liked it
@Amity Me -
thank u dear:)..yaa pursuing love!!he he:)...
@ Saras -
thank u dear:)
@ vidya-
thank u:)...glad u liked it:)
@ angel-
thank u sweetie:)..
@ Ria-
thank u dear:)
Hey...that was really nice! :)
This one was right up in your face! I like it.
the end!!!
that is awsome !
very well done!
@Anu -
thank u dear:)
@Amias-
thank u dear:)
@Missy -
as much as i love novels and fiction sometimes i do think its major influence in such cases!!... thank u:)...appreciated ur say:)
@ Americanising Desi-
trying to end!!... dellusions he sahi but still its jus a feeling!!. he he...
thank u dear
@ Shraddha-
thanku udear:)...glad u liked it;)
Wow! couldn't turn a blind eye to this composition of yours.
you have been awarded in my blog :)
nicely summed up...i think every person needs to remember this when in love!
@Shas -
thank u dear:)...
@ angel-
thank u dear:)...
@ Pri-
yep:)..tats soo true:)... thank u dear
This is a nice one. I love your use of imagery.
Melanie
very well written acrostic...
n ur blog is filled with em...u r inspirin me!!!
@ Melanie-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
@ Mayz -
wow...tats somethin comin from u:)...thank u:)...glad u liked it:)...
M in no way turning a blind eye to this post....
Beautiful as always tulip!:)
Nanditha, that was lovely. Unfortunately, I found bad english in the poem. Sorry to be a spoilsport by telling u that. And I will not point it out to u here where ppl can read. Ill let u know only if u ask me. Feel free to delete my comment if u dont want it showing.
@ Jaunty anima-
thank u dear:)...
@ Anand-
criticism is as welcomed as a coment here... never said i'm perfect:)..!!..
feel free to point out any mistake. thank u.
Wow that was aweeeesome!!! nice onee! :)
@ Little Miss Princess-
thank u dear:)
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