Thursday, December 31, 2009

SHOT IN THE DARK

Shouting with joy
Happy new year
On i go.
Trying to shoot my

Inside turmoils called

Nervousness but then

Treacherous regrets are
Hiding from me like
Endless darkness but here

Deep down there is
An enormous faith
Raising so bright
Killing with one shot.

PS: Happy new year to all:)

24 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

An excellent write as usual. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for all the support and comments this year. Much appreciated.

Happy New Year.
Yvonne.

Amal Bose said...

nice work :)
im sorry, i didnt get wat that bright light was.. ;)

Happy New Year :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

A Very Happy New Year to u too :)

Amias said...

What was you shooting?

Ria said...

lovely!!a very happy new yr to you too!! :)

roshwrites said...

Great :) Happy new year :)

Jaunty anima said...

have a gr8 year ahead:)

Creativity!! said...

Wish You Happy New Year :) :)

yamini_meduri said...

nice work dear...!!!

After a long time
I am here to read you
loved the way you wrote
love to be back more often

happy new year..!!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-

happy new year to u too dear:)///thank u for the same:)..hope to see u more this year too:)

stay cool:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amal Bose-

thank u dear:)...its faith to move on...made few corrections:)...i'm still learning hope u dint mind:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ An Ordinary Gal-

thank u dear:)...wish u the same

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias-

have made few changes...me shooting my nervousness to move on as regrets hold me back.. but its faith that is being my guiding light here... any corrections?:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Ria-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@roshwrites-

thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jaunty anima -

thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Creativity!!-

thank u dear:)...wish u the same:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@yamini-


thank u dear:)...have made few changes:)..thank u:)...

happy new year:)...hope to be more active this year too:)...

SandyCarlson said...

I hope you harness the power of that faith!

Jim said...

Hi Nan. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

This is a very nice acrostic. I had looked at the list but haven't done one. You are soooooo clever!
Just shoot your worries, 'in the dark(ness).' And faith will brightly rise!
I do hope you enter with the Acrostic Only. The new rules say only one entry per prompt. I think it used to be that the last one was the entry.
..
Oh yes, before we enter we are supposed to read the definitions of each prompt word. Then our poem should fit the meaning of that. Mine sometimes don't as I am off-the-wall once in a while. That rule might be for me.
..

Yellow Tulip said...

@SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jim-

thank u:)...yaa same here:)... i have joined too. hope to write more this year:)...thank u again

pRiYaN...! said...

hApPy nEw yEaR :) !!

Yellow Tulip said...

@pRiYaN-

thank u:)...wish u the same:)

 
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