Sunday, December 6, 2009

POLE DANCER


Pure paradise pleasure
Of overwhelming seduction
Longing for lust
Empowered by erection

Delusions by drugs
Arousing flames of fires
Nights lost in music
Craving for real touch
Enjoying rhythm she swings
Reaching out her audiences

37 comments:

Shafi said...

whaaaaw ... reallly cool.

Jaunty anima said...

My..My...U're an extremely talented poetess!!!

Anu...:) said...

Hey thats a really really good work!! :)

Cheers!

Amias said...

You are so right in your assessment of a pole dancer. I love the line, "empowered by erections!

I was just telling Saras that pole dancing should be a sport, because it takes lots of work, and one has to be very agile and skilled to pull it off.

This is a very good take on the prompt!

Amity Me said...

i second the motion with Amias comments...:)

vivid description of pol dancing and its effect on viewers...:)

wise take on the prompt!!!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Pole dancing is great if you have the body for it. Me? sadly not.
Great poem.

Yvonne.

pRiYaN...! said...

' nights lost in music !' that explains the happening around the pole dancer .. nice poem !

Tammie Lee said...

Wonderful how you portray different facets of the experience.

The Write Girl said...

Amazing words Yellow Tulip...and that is quite the photo. They are amazingly strong and acrobatic.

Creativity!! said...

Fabulous Fantastic Write Up Dear :) :)

Ria said...

Ahem ahem!now that was hot. :)

Ash....! said...

nice one....
you have gr8 innovative ideas..
keep it up!!!
:)

- Sugar Cube - said...

Stunning! Very well put!

Americanising Desi said...

and i could never beat you at this :D
hehehe not that i was competing but still :d

loved it word for word

Yellow Tulip said...

@Shafi -

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jaunty anima-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Anu...:)-

thank u dear;)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amias -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

i second u;)..it seriously takes a lot of character to do somethin ike tat...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amity Me-

cheers gal:)...thank u:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-

:)..he he..yaa i guess ur right!!..i hardly can touch my toes with out bending my knee!!...he he

Yellow Tulip said...

@pRiYaN.-

thank u:)....glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Tammie Lee-

thank u dear;)..glad u liked it;)

Yellow Tulip said...

@The Write Girl-

yep:)..loved the pic as well:)...thank u dear;)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Creativity-

thank u sweetie:)..glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Ria -

:)...thank u:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Ash-

thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Sugar Cube -

thank u dear;)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Americanising Desi-

*hugs*...
thank u sweets:)...glad u liked it:)..but i wod no were stand in the line if i need to try pole dancing he he!!...may be u can beat me there:);)

floreta said...

very sexy and works well. i especially like "empowered by erection" :D strip poles actually do look fun.

Yellow Tulip said...

@floreta -

thank u dear:)...yaa glad u liked it

vidya said...

Hi,
Very nicely described:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ vidya-

thank u dear:)...hello...welcome

Jim said...

Hi Y.T, this is very nice. Nice an naughty a little too.

Pole dancing is great if you have the body and the sex for it. Me? Out on both counts. It still might be fun, though.
..
Don't look for mine.
..

Yellow Tulip said...

Jim-

he he..:)..yaa thank u:)

jiths said...

great creativity...
empwrd by erection...nice thinkin...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ jiths-

thank u:)

Amias said...

Dear Poet,
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