Pure paradise pleasure
Of overwhelming seduction
Longing for lust
Empowered by erection
Delusions by drugs
Arousing flames of fires
Nights lost in music
Craving for real touch
Enjoying rhythm she swings
Reaching out her audiences
Sunday, December 6, 2009
POLE DANCER
Pure paradise pleasure
Of overwhelming seduction
Longing for lust
Empowered by erection
Delusions by drugs
Arousing flames of fires
Nights lost in music
Craving for real touch
Enjoying rhythm she swings
Reaching out her audiences
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whaaaaw ... reallly cool.
My..My...U're an extremely talented poetess!!!
Hey thats a really really good work!! :)
Cheers!
You are so right in your assessment of a pole dancer. I love the line, "empowered by erections!
I was just telling Saras that pole dancing should be a sport, because it takes lots of work, and one has to be very agile and skilled to pull it off.
This is a very good take on the prompt!
i second the motion with Amias comments...:)
vivid description of pol dancing and its effect on viewers...:)
wise take on the prompt!!!
Pole dancing is great if you have the body for it. Me? sadly not.
Great poem.
Yvonne.
' nights lost in music !' that explains the happening around the pole dancer .. nice poem !
Wonderful how you portray different facets of the experience.
Amazing words Yellow Tulip...and that is quite the photo. They are amazingly strong and acrobatic.
Fabulous Fantastic Write Up Dear :) :)
Ahem ahem!now that was hot. :)
nice one....
you have gr8 innovative ideas..
keep it up!!!
:)
Stunning! Very well put!
and i could never beat you at this :D
hehehe not that i was competing but still :d
loved it word for word
@Shafi -
thank u:)
@Jaunty anima-
thank u dear:)
@Anu...:)-
thank u dear;)
@Amias -
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
i second u;)..it seriously takes a lot of character to do somethin ike tat...
@Amity Me-
cheers gal:)...thank u:)...
@Yvonne-
:)..he he..yaa i guess ur right!!..i hardly can touch my toes with out bending my knee!!...he he
@pRiYaN.-
thank u:)....glad u liked it:)
@Tammie Lee-
thank u dear;)..glad u liked it;)
@The Write Girl-
yep:)..loved the pic as well:)...thank u dear;)...
@Creativity-
thank u sweetie:)..glad u liked it:)
@Ria -
:)...thank u:)...
@Ash-
thank u dear:)..
@Sugar Cube -
thank u dear;)
@Americanising Desi-
*hugs*...
thank u sweets:)...glad u liked it:)..but i wod no were stand in the line if i need to try pole dancing he he!!...may be u can beat me there:);)
very sexy and works well. i especially like "empowered by erection" :D strip poles actually do look fun.
@floreta -
thank u dear:)...yaa glad u liked it
Hi,
Very nicely described:)
@ vidya-
thank u dear:)...hello...welcome
Hi Y.T, this is very nice. Nice an naughty a little too.
Pole dancing is great if you have the body and the sex for it. Me? Out on both counts. It still might be fun, though.
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Don't look for mine.
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Jim-
he he..:)..yaa thank u:)
great creativity...
empwrd by erection...nice thinkin...
@ jiths-
thank u:)
Dear Poet,
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