I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
With every drop my soul dies
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
Everything around in no time bleaks
Memories bring liters of cries
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
Ahhw those smiles an enchanted mystiques
Missing your love and all those advise
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
I promise my dear on goddess of Greeks
Neither more secrets nor any more lies
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
My wandering soul, peace it seeks
For your care, it craves yet unwise
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
It is not working, just look into my eyes
Tears they are, not just any lies
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
PS: thank u Anu for correcting:)...
PSS: and my special thanks to Leo for helping me to understand this new style:)Villanelle
With every drop my soul dies
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
Everything around in no time bleaks
Memories bring liters of cries
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
Ahhw those smiles an enchanted mystiques
Missing your love and all those advise
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
I promise my dear on goddess of Greeks
Neither more secrets nor any more lies
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
My wandering soul, peace it seeks
For your care, it craves yet unwise
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
It is not working, just look into my eyes
Tears they are, not just any lies
I wish you rubbed those tears from cheeks
Nonstop my tears are flowing from weeks
PS: thank u Anu for correcting:)...
PSS: and my special thanks to Leo for helping me to understand this new style:)Villanelle
38 comments:
beautiful ..! :)
Very nice...
I am sorry if I am wrong but I think it should be "Nonstop my tears are* flowing *for weeks"
I hope you don't mind me saying that!:)
But really really touching one!
Lovely..! Nice re-use of words gets the exact feel across. :)
@ pinkZz-
thank u dear:)..
@ Anu.-
thank u dear:)..ya it should be...:)..i'll change:)..thank u:)
@ Guria-
thank u dear:)..glad u liked it..
Very well written Dear ..:)
You are brimming with Poetry ..!
@ Vyshu-
nothin dear...jus was tryin:)..thank u:)..
hey..i love to tell u that the main this i like about u is the way u have been improving since day one.
I loved these lines about tears..:)
keep posting :)
ooo written very beautifully... Luvd those teary lines...!..cya around gal!
Fabulous :D :) Extremely Loved It :D :)
@ Pramoda-
thank u dear:)..hope to learn more with each moment:)..thank u dear:)...
@ HaRy-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
@ Creativity-
thank u dear:)...happy to know u like it tat much:)
An excellent poem , well written.
Yvonne.
that was so touching....made me teary eyed!
@Yvonne-
thank u dear:)
@ Ria-
thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)
wonderful YT
hw nicely u have expressed....nice
@ The Solitary Writer-
thank u dear:)...
awww honey!
i love what you write but i keep wonder why so much sadness?
hugs!
i wish you'd find the true one who'd not give u any tears at all :)
Hey girl thanks for dropping by my blog and following me!
Ahhhh!!
Nice poem yaar! You have used right words to get the exact feel!
@ AD-
most of my poems r depressing cos i let my depression out like this dear:)..its not like i 'm always sad but when i'm sad it comes out as poems!!:)...
and thank u dear:)..hope i find the right person(soul mate):)he he:)
hugs:)...
@ Shruti -
thank u dear:)...i loved ur works too:)...
super awesome
one of my fav forms of poetry
keep it coming.
we both should sit and rhyme sometimes
Simply awesome. Loved each and every word. :)
@ freelancer-
thank u dear:)..sure dude:)...wod love tat:)
@ Jal Pari-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
Nice one...
@ Ash-
thank u:)
nice one swweetie.
@ angel -
thank u sweetie:)
my pleasure to share what i know :)
u take up all forms with such ease.. beautiful it is! :)
Sad but beautifully penned..!!
just lovely...felt a bit nostalgic as it created a sense of de ja vu...:)
@leo-
thank u dear:)...hope to learn more:)
@ Vinz-
thank u dear:)...welcome:)..hope u enjoyed my blog:)
@ rimz-
thank u ...but this is my first in this style..
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