Thursday, September 3, 2009

Dream


A dream
Indeed it was
With glint of passion hid
Heart shrills with ocean deep secrets
With in

Hot flame
Burns down inside
Fuming my cheeks with shy
Thrilling shivers run down my vain
With lust

Kisses
I crave for more
With blanket of warmth wrapped
A silky touch of soft velvet
With fire

I feel
The need and greed
Desire to breech the fear
Your unspoken promise of night
To live

Like bite
Of chocolate
I melt in ecstasy
We could live this eternal bliss
With love

A dream
Burns down inside
With blanket of warmth wrapped
Your unspoken promise of night
With love

37 comments:

angel said...
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angel said...

hmm.. very nice tulip:) ... good one sweetie..:)

Vyshu said...

Beautiful words Dear ..:) Very nice ..!

Leo said...

i loved this garland of thoughts a lot! :)

very nice Tulip! :)

kasabiangirl said...

Beautiful way to express your thoughts...loved reading it :)

KASHMIR-THE PARADISE said...

Thats expressive.....

P.S:- i have posted my 2nd post.

pinkZz said...

lovely..!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A lovely poem and so wonderful to read. keep them coming I enjoy them.

Yvonne.

Pramoda Meduri said...

Lovelyyy...:)..It was a nice read..keep expressing :)

roshwrites said...

This was fab... really well expressed :)

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

intense.. my heart bloomed reading this.. :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ angel -
thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vyshu-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ kasabiangirl-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ KASHMIR-THE PARADISE -

thank u:)yaa surely will check out dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ pinkZz-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne-
thank u dear glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda -
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ roshwrites -

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Rane -

thank u dear...glad u liked it:)

Americanising Desi said...

i m cravin for everything on that list of yours.
it is the kisses i want more.
and i had a conversation with myself about it on

http://voicesinwriting.wordpress.com/2009/09/02/kissing/

but honey you rock my heart everytime you write!

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Beautiful poem.

I can so relate :)

Creativity!! said...

Wow :D So Beautiful Poem Dear :D

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

excellent is the word :)
woww :)
Though time has not allowed me to gel up with your writings that much but this shall be one of your best poems :)
trust me :)
It truly penetrated the heart :) :)
Keep writing :)
Cheers :)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi!
Just came across your blog. I loved this post. The picture is amazing. You write very well. I even liked your previous post.
Happy Blogging :)
♪♫

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi-

thank u hon:)...u do have the same effect on me too:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jal Pari -

thank u dear:)...i'm glad:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Creativity-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ ..pAnKHuRi.-

thank u soo much dear:)...i'm honoured:)..really glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Cursed-

thank u:)..glad u liked my writings:)..hope to see u more:)

Americanising Desi said...

hey love,
the CAPRICORN woman is up on my blog :)

http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/09/04/the-capricorn-charms/

hugs!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hey...I'm done with the numbers tag..Thanks for the pleasure..:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Americanising Desi -

thank u dear:)...soo much:)..

hey u r blogrolled:)..i follow ur blog sweets...total fan:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda-

yaa dear:)..it was great:)...nice twist:)..glad u enjoyed it:)

yamini meduri said...

from the dream
the thoughts arrived
you wove them perfectly
to make a garland of words
taking us to a beautiful world of poetry

Yellow Tulip said...

@ yamini -

thank u dear:)...nicely versed :)

 
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