A dream
Indeed it was
With glint of passion hid
Heart shrills with ocean deep secrets
With in
Hot flame
Burns down inside
Fuming my cheeks with shy
Thrilling shivers run down my vain
With lust
Kisses
I crave for more
With blanket of warmth wrapped
A silky touch of soft velvet
With fire
I feel
The need and greed
Desire to breech the fear
Your unspoken promise of night
To live
Like bite
Of chocolate
I melt in ecstasy
We could live this eternal bliss
With love
A dream
Burns down inside
With blanket of warmth wrapped
Your unspoken promise of night
With love
Indeed it was
With glint of passion hid
Heart shrills with ocean deep secrets
With in
Hot flame
Burns down inside
Fuming my cheeks with shy
Thrilling shivers run down my vain
With lust
Kisses
I crave for more
With blanket of warmth wrapped
A silky touch of soft velvet
With fire
I feel
The need and greed
Desire to breech the fear
Your unspoken promise of night
To live
Like bite
Of chocolate
I melt in ecstasy
We could live this eternal bliss
With love
A dream
Burns down inside
With blanket of warmth wrapped
Your unspoken promise of night
With love
37 comments:
hmm.. very nice tulip:) ... good one sweetie..:)
Beautiful words Dear ..:) Very nice ..!
i loved this garland of thoughts a lot! :)
very nice Tulip! :)
Beautiful way to express your thoughts...loved reading it :)
Thats expressive.....
P.S:- i have posted my 2nd post.
lovely..!
A lovely poem and so wonderful to read. keep them coming I enjoy them.
Yvonne.
Lovelyyy...:)..It was a nice read..keep expressing :)
This was fab... really well expressed :)
intense.. my heart bloomed reading this.. :)
@ angel -
thank u dear
@ Vyshu-
thank u dear:)
@ Leo-
thank u dear:)
@ kasabiangirl-
thank u dear:)
@ KASHMIR-THE PARADISE -
thank u:)yaa surely will check out dear:)
@ pinkZz-
thank u dear:)
@ Yvonne-
thank u dear glad u liked it:)
@ Pramoda -
thank u dear:)
@ roshwrites -
thank u dear:)
@ Rane -
thank u dear...glad u liked it:)
i m cravin for everything on that list of yours.
it is the kisses i want more.
and i had a conversation with myself about it on
http://voicesinwriting.wordpress.com/2009/09/02/kissing/
but honey you rock my heart everytime you write!
Beautiful poem.
I can so relate :)
Wow :D So Beautiful Poem Dear :D
excellent is the word :)
woww :)
Though time has not allowed me to gel up with your writings that much but this shall be one of your best poems :)
trust me :)
It truly penetrated the heart :) :)
Keep writing :)
Cheers :)
Hi!
Just came across your blog. I loved this post. The picture is amazing. You write very well. I even liked your previous post.
Happy Blogging :)
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@ Americanising Desi-
thank u hon:)...u do have the same effect on me too:)
@ Jal Pari -
thank u dear:)...i'm glad:)
@ Creativity-
thank u dear:)
@ ..pAnKHuRi.-
thank u soo much dear:)...i'm honoured:)..really glad u liked it:)
@ Cursed-
thank u:)..glad u liked my writings:)..hope to see u more:)
hey love,
the CAPRICORN woman is up on my blog :)
http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/09/04/the-capricorn-charms/
hugs!
Hey...I'm done with the numbers tag..Thanks for the pleasure..:)
@ Americanising Desi -
thank u dear:)...soo much:)..
hey u r blogrolled:)..i follow ur blog sweets...total fan:)...thank u:)
@ Pramoda-
yaa dear:)..it was great:)...nice twist:)..glad u enjoyed it:)
from the dream
the thoughts arrived
you wove them perfectly
to make a garland of words
taking us to a beautiful world of poetry
@ yamini -
thank u dear:)...nicely versed :)
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