She was walking along the sea shores in moonlight tonight, the waves gushing and roaring to kiss her feet, sea breeze caressing her cheeks brushed her curls tugging behind her ears.. Her polished feet endeared by sand, like angel she glides hugging herself, lost in her thoughts.. moaning..with desperation.. hoping and just wishing for no storm or thunderbolt to ever struck. She walks away disappointing the waves.. Her eyes moist with glimpse of goodbyes she once said, aching for her love to return soon, every night she goes to LIGHTHOUSE... praying for it to guide her sailor.. for her sweetheart's safe return.
PS:...i dint get the pic which was in my mind:(..this was the close i cod get...hope u dont mind:)...enjoy...its just a figment of my imagination..
40 comments:
Fabulous Post :) :) Excellent Write Up :) :)
@Creativity-
thank u dear;)...jus was experimentin
Excellent post as always. I can always count on a good read from you.
Yvonne.
Been there! Beautiful piece.
Nicely done!!!
figment of imagination or real, but i can relate to it my dear....my hubby works in a cruise ship in the Caribbean...:)
wonderful rendition of the prompt...:)
hugs!
Amity
it sounds so romantic :)
good one gurl!! :)
very nice indeed..
i love your take on prompt..
@Yvonne-
thank u dear:)...glad u enjoy ur stay here:)...
@SandyCarlson-
thank u dear;)...
@Tumblewords-
thank u dear:)
@Amity Me-
thank u dear:)..*hugs*...take care dear...i hope for his safe return always...
@floreta-
yaa:)...y does love always have to be accompanied with ach?!!..i stil never get it:)... thank u dear
@Ria -
thank u dear;)...
@Shraddha-
thanku dear
glad u liked it:)
Such emotion and yearning in your words...beautifully done!
@Sweetest in the Gale-
thank u dear;)...glad u liked it:)
Good textual imagery. I would say put a black picture and have the reader imagine :P
@nesquarx.com-
thank u :)...hmmm yaa:)
Loving and longing. Its awesome.
@Shas -
thank u;)
What a lovely piece. Picture is just fine, it mates well with your prose.
One can imagine the longing. Nice post.
Hey!!
Really sweet and nice one :)
Could almost feel sand beneath my feet :D
@Amias-
thank u dear...:)..
@Carlos Gesmundo -
thank u dear:)
@Cursed-
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)..
absolutely touching dear..:) nice pic any wayy..so he r the days going on..?? its been many days that we did regular blogging i guess...:(.. hope the good ol days come back to us..:)
Wonderful peice of imagination then I must say :D
Obviously why would we mind it budhuu !!
Take care :)
@ Pramoda-
yaa dear:(...been missin out a lot these days:(...take care dear:)...
@.pAnKHuRi-
:)...thank u dear;)..
its tampered pic...not the one which i had in mind naa...soo i thought its not tat good...but thank u dear:)...ur so sweet:)
'Every night' she goes to the lighthouse for prayer, prayer for her lost (sailor) lover.
You did good with the prompt, very good! :-)
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@Jim -
thank u:)...
Whoa..gr8 one Tulip!!
When do you write a bad one, smeone should ask!!
Lady Hats off!!
wonderful take on the prompt!
I cud feel it completely..
@Jaunty anima-
thank u dear:)
@Vanessa
thank u dear:)
Great writing!
@vidya -
thank u dear:)
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