Thought you were my exclusive one
That tear you kissed and smile you brought
Your tender kiss and naughty smiles
Ahh... the way you made me feel
Happy and content I was in your arms...
Those good night sleeps and dreams of you
With each day passing I wished for more of you
Passion and crave grew stronger day by day
You never knew how insatiable I was
Scared of being addictive of you I always said lets end us today...
Those silly jokes and crazy tales
Jet black eyes which loved in silence
Your whispers at night and hardness for me
Your husky smell and hugs and cuddles
Now like haunting ghosts they haunt me always...
I always had known I fell for you
Scared that you might never love
Happy I was to know you cared
Blessed I felt to feel as yours
But now I wonder was I wrong...
Wish I did not once or twice
But my dear forever it was to be yours
But stupid and naive I was indeed
With laser you did cut through my heart
You left me shattered for someone better...
Every time I see you even today
My heart still skips a beat or two
Wishing for life which can never be true
I'm trying hard to conquer this elusive pain
For a long journey to survive alone ahead...
50 comments:
nice....perfect..painful..!!!
@ yamini meduri -
thank u dear:)...
Beautiful!
Keep writing! :)
@ Anu..-
thank u dear:)
does ur heart still miss a beat or two.. or acts like that.. the poems good..free
"Pain" will make you smile
its what, breezing you agile
conquer & win were never my words
its all about being dissolved in you for a while
:)!
Thats how pain is'nt it? starts with bliss and happyness with honey dwelling love and finishes like a rose admist thorns!! yu did that well...started with the crazy blind love and finished the pain!!..ouch that shud hurt..nice one
Hey Tulip, I hope that never has happened to you in real life. It did me, it isn't nice.
Since we had the prompt, I was just waiting for 'your' exclusive one to become 'your' elusive one.
I do wish I had that though when I wrote mine, I had a complete lack of words. I should have named it the wordless peom. I think I will change it NOW! Thank you.
Please do come read it. Thank you for peeking in on my eating and grandkidding at the other blog. I appreciate that a lot. :-)
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Nan T, that was an old link. This one is generic:
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Aww...thats painful!! :(
Awesome poem :D
@ soin-
:)...thank u:...i'n not totally sure of it yet!!..he he:)..
@ Makk-
loved ur say dear:)..thank u:)..welcome to my blog:)...hope u enjoy ur stay:)
@ HaRy-
thank u dear:)..loved the way u analyzed it:)...
@ Jim -
but ur take on copse is very good:)...a consoling poem for this:)... thank u:)...
thank u for sharing ur experience... :)
@ Jim -
hey not a prob at all:)...u r in my blog list:)...i enjoy reading ur blog:)...found my way:)he he
@ Ria-
thank u dear:)
@ roshwrites-
thank u dear:)
This was simply beautiful to read.
Yvonne.
This strikes home!
Been down that road, my friend! I felt it with you. Thanks.
It broke my heart when I got to the part about him leaving for someone better. Better than what? My defenses were engaged, for what could be better than someone who could write a poem like this?
so tender , heartfelt and true!!
hugs and love
shraddha
that was awesome work.. the pain has been depicted in all its true colours..
i really loved the expression "shattered for someone better" thats wat almost everyone says isnt it..
beautiful work.
@ Yvonne-
thank u:)glad u loved it:)
@ Tumblewords-
jus a thought many have gone through such pain i thik:(..sorry dear...
@ SandyCarlson -
thank u dear:)...thank u for ur support:)
@ Jukota-
thank u very much dear:)...better in the sense not the one i was for him naa soo:)..
@ Shraddha-
thank u dear:)*hugs*
@ Amal Bose-
yaa:)...thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)
So filled with pain. So sorry that I can say I understand.
@ Patois -
thank u:)...
Check out my blog fast. Else you'll regret. I'm not kidding !!!!! :D
:)...thank u dear:)....
U deserve it :) Glad you like it!!
Brilliant words and beautiful piece...there is so much emotion and pain which you convey in heartfelt words.
@ Cursed♪-
thank u again:)...
@ The Write Girl-
thank u dear:)...
Perfect,painful though!!Awesome work tulip..!!
fickle love
can be so sad
your words flow~
@ Jaunty anima-
thank u dear:)
@ Tammie Lee-
lovely comment dear:)..its soo true...
reminds me of the poem whch i wrote few yrs ago....superb :)
Boooootifooolll :) :)
*wow*
@ The Solitary Writer -
thank u dear:)
@ pAnKHuRi-
:)...hmmm thank u:)
well wriiten...beautiful description
but y does does love have to hurt that bad?
@ Aparna -
thank u dear:)...thats y its called love r something like tat dear!!:)...
:)
God forbid if anything like ths happens to anyone. I hope that never has happened to you in real life. love you and keep writing. you are a gem and gems need to be treasured and kept safe.
mwah
@ Americanising Desi-
soo sweet thank u dear:)..i'm really touched:)...
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