Sunday, October 11, 2009

You


Life is beautiful, with you
Dreams do come true, it’s you
Got a reason to live, from you
Living in love, for you
Loving my life, in you
Gift of warmth, to you
Be mine for ever, will you
My only you I still, love you
Forgive my err, can you
I need no talisman, but you..

52 comments:

KRAZY KOMPLEX KITTEN said...

hey im the 1st 2 comment !!! yippiee..!! well....this one's a beautiful poem dear..i love it... :) ..

KRAZY KOMPLEX KITTEN said...

hey i must say u really write great poems....all very heart-touching....infact i must thank u...bcoz aftr reading ur loop style of poem...i learnt to ryt dem down...thnk u !!! :D

pinkZz said...

oh lovely YOU..! :)

Being Pramoda... said...

hey ..

superblyy done ..:) so nice of YOU..

SandyCarlson said...

Very, very lovely!

roshwrites said...

Nicely done Yellow Tulip :)
Has this type of poem got a name? :D

Creativity!! said...

Woww :) So Sweet Beautiful Lovely Poem :) :) Yellow Tulip, Loved It A Lot :) :)

All The Very Best Success :) :) Come Up With Many More Poems :) :) Take Care :) :)

Guria said...

Perfect :)
Couldn't have said it any better...

swapnap said...

The picture you picked for this write is so adorable.It adds to the beauty along with your wonderful words. Good that you don't require any talisman...

Anu...:) said...

Very Very Very nice post! :)

spacedlaw said...

How true!

Tammie Lee said...

this is so sweet!

rimz said...

its swweet n romantic, each n evry word... loved it ..:)
tke cre n kip loving...:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ KKK -

thank u dear:)n special thank u for being first:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ KKK-

thank u soo much dear:)...glad to hear that:)...:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ pinkZz-

no its you,,...:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Pramoda-

thank u too:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ roshwrites-

thank u dear:)...n noo i dont think so dear...i jus wrote jus like tat:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Creativity-

thank u dear:)..a lot:)...

surely will try:)...thank u:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Guria-

yaa:)..wish someone wod have meant tat and expressd!!..he he:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ swapnap -

yaa:)...thank u dear:)...no hocus n focus for me:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Anu-

thank u very very very much dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ spacedlaw -

:)...thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Tammie Lee-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ rimz-

thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Sweet and lovely...and the photo is precious. :~)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sweetest in the Gale-

thank u dear:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Beautiful words, lovely sentiment.

Yvonne.

Vita Stunder said...

I truly love this poem! :)
Beautiful :)

Tumblewords: said...

A lovely talisman, to be sure!

Kathiesbirds said...

Very nice take on the prompt! Oh to be loved like that! Oh to love like that!

Leo said...

well done.. YOU!! :D

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Yvonne.-

thnk u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Vita Stunder-
thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Tumblewords-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Kathiesbirds-

yaaa:)...tooo good to be true right!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Leo-

thank u:)

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

great one tulip...lovely use of words..

Ria said...

that was a very sweet poem. :)

Jim said...

This is sooooo sweet! You could wisper it in my ear for a long time. If more people knew what talisman meant it would be a wonderful Valentine verse.

I missed your smilng face on my comments this week, I have a story poem about a Mr. Talisman. :-)
..

Jaunty anima said...

It seems to be a spontaneously written..cute poem!!loved it!!

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Shraddha-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Ria-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jim-

:)...thank u sir:)...sorry about tat:((..now a days too much net prob here:((...i wod'nt miss the story:)..surely will check:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Jaunty anima -

it is actually:)...thank u:)...

chocolate lover said...

nice :)

keep blogging

Nadege said...

a delightful, charming poem you've
written here, miss tulip.

Yellow Tulip said...

@chocolate lover-

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Nadege-

thank u sir:)

The Solitary Writer said...

ahem...another master peice frm the gr8 poetess...m nt much into poetries bt nw after reading u nd leo i can see that u 2 r amongst the best poets in blogworld ....beautiful

Yellow Tulip said...

@The Solitary Writer-

wow..tats really a great compliment dear:)...i'm stull learning:)...thank u :)

 
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