Life is beautiful, with you
Dreams do come true, it’s you
Got a reason to live, from you
Living in love, for you
Loving my life, in you
Gift of warmth, to you
Be mine for ever, will you
My only you I still, love you
Forgive my err, can you
I need no talisman, but you..
Dreams do come true, it’s you
Got a reason to live, from you
Living in love, for you
Loving my life, in you
Gift of warmth, to you
Be mine for ever, will you
My only you I still, love you
Forgive my err, can you
I need no talisman, but you..
51 comments:
hey im the 1st 2 comment !!! yippiee..!! well....this one's a beautiful poem dear..i love it... :) ..
hey i must say u really write great poems....all very heart-touching....infact i must thank u...bcoz aftr reading ur loop style of poem...i learnt to ryt dem down...thnk u !!! :D
oh lovely YOU..! :)
hey ..
superblyy done ..:) so nice of YOU..
Very, very lovely!
Nicely done Yellow Tulip :)
Has this type of poem got a name? :D
Woww :) So Sweet Beautiful Lovely Poem :) :) Yellow Tulip, Loved It A Lot :) :)
All The Very Best Success :) :) Come Up With Many More Poems :) :) Take Care :) :)
Perfect :)
Couldn't have said it any better...
The picture you picked for this write is so adorable.It adds to the beauty along with your wonderful words. Good that you don't require any talisman...
Very Very Very nice post! :)
this is so sweet!
its swweet n romantic, each n evry word... loved it ..:)
tke cre n kip loving...:)
@ KKK -
thank u dear:)n special thank u for being first:)...
@ KKK-
thank u soo much dear:)...glad to hear that:)...:)...
@ pinkZz-
no its you,,...:)...thank u:)
@ Pramoda-
thank u too:)...
@ SandyCarlson-
thank u dear:)
@ roshwrites-
thank u dear:)...n noo i dont think so dear...i jus wrote jus like tat:)
@ Creativity-
thank u dear:)..a lot:)...
surely will try:)...thank u:)..
@ Guria-
yaa:)..wish someone wod have meant tat and expressd!!..he he:)...thank u:)
@ swapnap -
yaa:)...thank u dear:)...no hocus n focus for me:)..
@ Anu-
thank u very very very much dear:)
@ spacedlaw -
:)...thank u:)
@ Tammie Lee-
thank u dear:)
@ rimz-
thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)
Sweet and lovely...and the photo is precious. :~)
@ Sweetest in the Gale-
thank u dear:)
Beautiful words, lovely sentiment.
Yvonne.
I truly love this poem! :)
Beautiful :)
A lovely talisman, to be sure!
Very nice take on the prompt! Oh to be loved like that! Oh to love like that!
well done.. YOU!! :D
@ Yvonne.-
thnk u dear:)
@ Vita Stunder-
thank u dear:)
@ Tumblewords-
thank u dear:)
@ Kathiesbirds-
yaaa:)...tooo good to be true right!!
@ Leo-
thank u:)
great one tulip...lovely use of words..
that was a very sweet poem. :)
This is sooooo sweet! You could wisper it in my ear for a long time. If more people knew what talisman meant it would be a wonderful Valentine verse.
I missed your smilng face on my comments this week, I have a story poem about a Mr. Talisman. :-)
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It seems to be a spontaneously written..cute poem!!loved it!!
@ Shraddha-
thank u dear:)
@ Ria-
thank u dear:)
@ Jim-
:)...thank u sir:)...sorry about tat:((..now a days too much net prob here:((...i wod'nt miss the story:)..surely will check:)
@ Jaunty anima -
it is actually:)...thank u:)...
nice :)
keep blogging
a delightful, charming poem you've
written here, miss tulip.
@chocolate lover-
thank u:)
@Nadege-
thank u sir:)
ahem...another master peice frm the gr8 poetess...m nt much into poetries bt nw after reading u nd leo i can see that u 2 r amongst the best poets in blogworld ....beautiful
@The Solitary Writer-
wow..tats really a great compliment dear:)...i'm stull learning:)...thank u :)
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