Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Kismet


Haiku heights
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Your Kismet foretold
Yours I m forever now;
Don't take for granted!
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Your kismet foretold
Unsure threats still lingers so
Don't take for granted!
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Your kismet foretold
You shall work love pray play and
Not take for granted!
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My kismet foretold
Life not taken for granted
Brings joy to us both
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Our kismet foretold
Forever to remind each
Don't take for granted!
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13 comments:

Ellecee said...

excellent haiku and a good message. So true that we should never take each other or our circumstances for granted :-)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I agree with Ellecee!

Ignoring Kismet

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank you both:-) ...appreciate your words...

Jaideep said...

Simplest haiku with magical message!,thank you :)

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u....glad u liked it

Pranita said...

Beautiful haiku... life lessons!!!

Carpet of stars - A Haiku

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

I really loved your haiku....I believe in fate/destiny....But, we shouldn't take it for granted!
Great message!

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u dear:-)

Yellow Tulip said...

Same here...glad to know u got the message I was trying to portrait here Soo perfectly ...thank u

Gemma Wiseman said...

Like a gentle warning sensitively explained!

Yellow Tulip said...

Yaàa:-) thank u... subtleties work better than harshness..anger r frustrations..

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

I love this set of Haiku. Wonderfully written. An important message.
Thank you.
Siggi in Downeast Maine

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank you:-) glad u liked

 
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