Haiku heights
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Your Kismet foretold
Yours I m forever now;
Don't take for granted!
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Your kismet foretold
Unsure threats still lingers so
Don't take for granted!
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Your kismet foretold
You shall work love pray play and
Not take for granted!
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My kismet foretold
Life not taken for granted
Brings joy to us both
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Our kismet foretold
Forever to remind each
Don't take for granted!
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13 comments:
excellent haiku and a good message. So true that we should never take each other or our circumstances for granted :-)
I agree with Ellecee!
Ignoring Kismet
Thank you both:-) ...appreciate your words...
Simplest haiku with magical message!,thank you :)
Thank u....glad u liked it
Beautiful haiku... life lessons!!!
Carpet of stars - A Haiku
I really loved your haiku....I believe in fate/destiny....But, we shouldn't take it for granted!
Great message!
Thank u dear:-)
Same here...glad to know u got the message I was trying to portrait here Soo perfectly ...thank u
Like a gentle warning sensitively explained!
Yaàa:-) thank u... subtleties work better than harshness..anger r frustrations..
I love this set of Haiku. Wonderfully written. An important message.
Thank you.
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Thank you:-) glad u liked
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