Saturday, April 28, 2012

CLARITY

Haiku heights
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Ah! Save my soul from

Over crowded attention;

Loosing Clarity

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Scattered randomly

Heart shattered into pieces;

Draining clarity

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His Vision impaired

With so little clarity

He mends broken heart

23 comments:

Ellecee said...

I really enjoyed your haiku today. The last one is my favourite. "with so little clarity" he is able to mend. Thank you.

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

'overcrowded attention ~ so true ~ lovely haiku ~ great messages ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

Grace said...

I like the set specially the last one...broken heart is what we get with little clarity ~

Prasoon said...

Beautifull.... Haiku....

Deep and intense.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Enjoyed all the three...Very beautiful set!
Fuddling thoughts

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice set! Second one is my favourite:)

Pranita said...

Intense! And very beautiful... ur getting better by the day! :)

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u:-) glad u enjoyed ....

Yellow Tulip said...

Yaa..thank u:-) ..over crowded attention I feel always makes it hard to guess which is genuine and true interests...

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u...glad u liked it:-)

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u very much:-)

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u ...I'm happy tat u enjoyed :-) ...

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u:-) ..

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u very much....:-) ...

Jaideep said...

Wanted to write the same comment,nevertheless, you are only getting better and better, we rock!

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Wonderfully crafted haiku, well done .... nice compositions.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Where is that Broken Heart Mender of whom you write? Does he make house calls?

Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

CYNOSURE said...

I'm flattered on your writing and thoughts after reading this...such an awesome one... :)

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

Very nicely written...like your haiku very much.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u:-)

Yellow Tulip said...

He he..nope has made my heart as his home.. not a house guest who makes calls!.. only comes out through words.. playing n teasing!..

Yellow Tulip said...

Thank u very much:-) ... I'm happy u enjoyed :-)

Yellow Tulip said...

Thànk u very much Siggi...:-) glad u liked it

 
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