My Heart's Rhyme: CLARITY

Saturday, April 28, 2012

CLARITY

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Ah! Save my soul from

Over crowded attention;

Loosing Clarity

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Scattered randomly

Heart shattered into pieces;

Draining clarity

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His Vision impaired

With so little clarity

He mends broken heart

23 comments:

Ellecee said...: I really enjoyed your haiku today. The last one is my favourite. "with so little clarity" he is able to mend. Thank you.; April 28, 2012 at 2:51 AM
carol l mckenna said...: 'overcrowded attention ~ so true ~ lovely haiku ~ great messages ~thanks, namaste, ^_^; April 28, 2012 at 2:55 AM
Grace said...: I like the set specially the last one...broken heart is what we get with little clarity ~; April 28, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Prasoon Khare said...: Beautifull.... Haiku....

Deep and intense.; April 28, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Sri Valli said...: Enjoyed all the three...Very beautiful set!
Fuddling thoughts; April 28, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Tarang Sinha said...: Nice set! Second one is my favourite:); April 28, 2012 at 12:52 PM
Pranita said...: Intense! And very beautiful... ur getting better by the day! :); April 28, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u:-) glad u enjoyed ....; April 28, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Yaa..thank u:-) ..over crowded attention I feel always makes it hard to guess which is genuine and true interests...; April 28, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u...glad u liked it:-); April 28, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u very much:-); April 28, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u ...I'm happy tat u enjoyed :-) ...; April 28, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u:-) ..; April 28, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u very much....:-) ...; April 28, 2012 at 3:07 PM
Jaideep Rao said...: Wanted to write the same comment,nevertheless, you are only getting better and better, we rock!; April 28, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Chèvrefeuille said...: Wonderfully crafted haiku, well done .... nice compositions.; April 28, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: Where is that Broken Heart Mender of whom you write? Does he make house calls?

Seeking Clarity—and Shadows; April 29, 2012 at 12:34 AM
CYNOSURE said...: I'm flattered on your writing and thoughts after reading this...such an awesome one... :); April 29, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Siggi in Downeast Maine said...: Very nicely written...like your haiku very much.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine; April 29, 2012 at 2:17 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u:-); May 3, 2012 at 12:31 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: He he..nope has made my heart as his home.. not a house guest who makes calls!.. only comes out through words.. playing n teasing!..; May 3, 2012 at 12:34 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thank u very much:-) ... I'm happy u enjoyed :-); May 3, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: Thànk u very much Siggi...:-) glad u liked it; May 3, 2012 at 12:39 AM

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