Sunday, April 22, 2012

EAU

Soul lost in shadows
Shining bright flies high to light...
With drop of eau...

Lost hope, faith and dried
Dear soul fights back and blooms high
With drop of eau..

Is Soul that brings smile
Is light and shimmering bright
This drop of eau..

End of dark age with
Ageless thirst of light to quench
Unleashed soul, eau..


Acrosticonly

2 comments:

Leo said...

Umm.. lovely words, Nan... but isn't the integrity of the acrostic lost?

Just a haiku with "EAU" as the centrepiece would've been so much more effective in this instance I think :)

Yellow Tulip said...

Yaa I thought of splitting the flow.. but I couldn't .. it was just well thoughts flew n codnt stop myself..

 
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