I stand still...waiting for you...
Patience breaking against my will....it is true..
Hope was a sweet pill..life bloomed each time as new...
Heart but is now seriously ill..come now or I'll surely sue..
Patience breaking against my will....it is true..
Hope was a sweet pill..life bloomed each time as new...
Heart but is now seriously ill..come now or I'll surely sue..
18 comments:
nice one Tulip :) but how can u sue the one u don't know will come or not? ;)
jokes aside, i liked the emotion and anticipation here.. well said.
@Leo -
thanks dear..:)that's how hope wins over breaking patience by being positive of suing!!:)... its a conflict between hope and despair...two basic emotions which i think rules us when you miss somethin r someone:)
Wonderful, words Tulip, short but the message came over,
Thanks for your visit and comment
very much appreciated.
Yvonne.
aw i like it.
waiting - if only I could be better
at this one thing -
your poem Miss Tulips captures the
essence of how one feels trying
to hold on to hope.
very nicely put tulip...
interestin rhymin
Yes, hope is sweet pill, it keeps our hearts alive but then...it may murmur weakly when hope is gone...:( sad isn't it?
i miss you tulippy...where have u been? or where have i been? me? i am quite busy...:-)
i m so sorry havent been around :( no forgiveness for me i know but still!
i have missed reading you and as soon as i came here i went wild :D
this is just :) you know what i m goin to say :D
Hey Nanditha.. nice feelings and even more nicely expressed..:)
@Yvonne-
Always appreciate your take on my write dear:)..thank u
@ Isha Ethera -
r u?:)..thank u for dropping by
@ Nadege-
Tried my best.. :)..thank u dear:)..
@ Aparna-
thank u dear
@ Mayz -
:)
...
@ Amity-
miss u all here too dear:(..was kind of in a writer's block i guess..hope i'm back too..
@Divaa Divine-
thank u very much dear:)..missing u all too:(..
"hugs..
@Pramoda-
good to hear from u dear:)..hw r u?..missed u hear..
thank u
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