Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Hopeless Heartaches(4)


I stand still...waiting for you...
Patience breaking against my will....it is true..

Hope was a sweet pill..life bloomed each time as new...
Heart but is now seriously ill..come now or I'll surely sue..

18 comments:

Leo said...

nice one Tulip :) but how can u sue the one u don't know will come or not? ;)

jokes aside, i liked the emotion and anticipation here.. well said.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Leo -

thanks dear..:)that's how hope wins over breaking patience by being positive of suing!!:)... its a conflict between hope and despair...two basic emotions which i think rules us when you miss somethin r someone:)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Wonderful, words Tulip, short but the message came over,

Thanks for your visit and comment
very much appreciated.
Yvonne.

Isha Ethera said...

aw i like it.

Nadege said...

waiting - if only I could be better
at this one thing -

your poem Miss Tulips captures the
essence of how one feels trying
to hold on to hope.

Aparna said...

very nicely put tulip...

Mayz said...

interestin rhymin

Amity said...

Yes, hope is sweet pill, it keeps our hearts alive but then...it may murmur weakly when hope is gone...:( sad isn't it?

i miss you tulippy...where have u been? or where have i been? me? i am quite busy...:-)

Divaa Divine said...

i m so sorry havent been around :( no forgiveness for me i know but still!

i have missed reading you and as soon as i came here i went wild :D

this is just :) you know what i m goin to say :D

Being Pramoda... said...

Hey Nanditha.. nice feelings and even more nicely expressed..:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-

Always appreciate your take on my write dear:)..thank u

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Isha Ethera -

r u?:)..thank u for dropping by

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nadege-

Tried my best.. :)..thank u dear:)..

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Aparna-

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Mayz -
:)
...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity-

miss u all here too dear:(..was kind of in a writer's block i guess..hope i'm back too..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Divaa Divine-

thank u very much dear:)..missing u all too:(..

"hugs..

Yellow Tulip said...

@Pramoda-

good to hear from u dear:)..hw r u?..missed u hear..

thank u

 
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