Like dew drops my dear, you fill her heart with so much desire..
So clear and pure, it tends to grow with every smile and sight of yours..
How strange it is, but when you talk in crowd with all..
The dew drops fall, shatters and scatters with reality striking hard..
Her heart weeps, for she has sinned by wanting you to love her more..
With every dawn, this love for you blooms again..
New desires and wish grow again, capturing your bright sunshine smile..
Her poor heart builds all the hope and flies high on cloud 9..
From dawn till dusk, she lives happy and loud like innocent kid enjoying its first step..
Unaware of the dark cloud coming ahead, she's still living her beautiful dream..
She sees you in all this shining armor, marching forward only to rescue her..
Sadly my dear, with night comes nightmares that she can hardly escape..
She still finds you beside smiling and asleep, but then you were never there with her whole day..
Confused her soul, of whats real and whats reel..
Poor heart, she weeps all night alone..
With love for you still intact, she falls asleep on cold wet night..
Blame it on dawn, for she wakes up next day..
With growing love and desiring for more..
One silly wish, for her love to be matched by only yours..
Her day repeats, but then is it a boon or a curse?!!..
She lives the day like as if she's blessed..
But as night comes she knows it is not..
So conflicting it is,this dream from reality..
Living a dream is it really a sweet escape?!!
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26 comments:
A wonderful post and a real pleasure to read.
Yvonne.
This is so beautiful Tulip...though poignant, reason I could relate to it!
Thanks for sharing your dreams...:)
Nan back to enchant us with her long verses? :) cool.. this was a very beautiful take.. poignant indeed.
you opened the doors of heaven for me - breath taking!
Beautiful dream. cool.
Living a dream. Love the cleverness of 'whats real and whats reel'.
Very beautiful and moving my friend. You paint a lovely dream world. Oh, to be in my dreams.
Melanie
Well, I liked your poem so well weaved with the threads of some thoughts born in your heart..
Wow..welcome back..
CUte template and even beautiful poetry..
Nice feelings u have expressed Nandita.. Keep it up..:)
i feel scared commentin on ur posts...they r jus so beautiful that i feel my words wud look rather silly
Beautiful as always......... only you could have described the myriad, changing colours of her heart so beautifully!
I am commenting after a long time, I have been really irregular but I do have been reading you...
I just tagged you on my blog. And I would love you to take it up! It's very interesting, and seems to be a rage right now in Blogosphere! :)
@Yvonne.-
thank u dear:)
@Amity -
thank u dear:)...glad u liked it
@Leo-
thank u dear:)...trying my best:((...missing this a lot these days:(
@Americanising Desi-
thank u dear 'hugs'...miss u:)
@Harshad mehta -
thank u:)...
@Tumblewords-
yaa..thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)
@Melanie-
thank u dear:)...i'm really very glad that u liked it
@Ramesh Sood -
yaa,..some say its jus silly thoughts!:(...thank u:)
@Pramoda-
thank u dear:)...very nice to see u here:)
@Mayz -
nope...words coming from u can never be silly...:)...love ur works a lot:)..thank u for commenting.. n i'm glad u liked it:)
@Guria-
definitely will try tat out dear:)...have been irregular as well:(...
such a pleasurable read tulip...verses intertwined with flow and rhyme
dreaming is a way to escape reality...to create a world with our wildest imagination where even impossible becomes possible
an amazing poem of dreamy,
magical love, this woman holding
onto a piece of heaven's sky.
@Aparna-
thank u aparna:)...glad u liked it
@Nadege-
hoping to not loose the grip...thank u dear:)...
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