My Heart's Rhyme: MURMUR

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

MURMUR

Melodious rhythM
Undaunted love flU
Rising now fasteR
Me or is it hiM
Undoubtedly its yoU
Rolling high this love costeR

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51 comments:

Amity said...: Wow...what a heartfelt murmur!

I like this one and this is quite a challenge to write...where start end of line is an acrostic...:)

Nice!; March 16, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Americanising Desi said...: yipieeeee you get me all excited babes!; March 16, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Jim said...: This was a fun write wasn't it! Fun to read too. Me or Him? I think it is both.
On the last line I missed a meaning. Did you mean 'love coaster' like 'rollercoaster?'
..; March 16, 2010 at 1:12 PM
SandyCarlson said...: Intensely beautiful, warm, and fun!; March 16, 2010 at 3:00 PM
RHYTHM AND RHYME said...: Wonderful words and most cleverly written if I may say so.

Yvonne.; March 16, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Creativity said...: Beautiful Lines Dear :) :); March 16, 2010 at 5:38 PM
PinkZz said...: lovely acrostic :); March 16, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Jaunty anima said...: Now that gets me going!!
wow..u're so good with this!!; March 16, 2010 at 10:44 PM
Rià said...: where r u these days?; March 16, 2010 at 11:06 PM
robkistner said...: Nicely done. Enjoyed this, thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse; March 17, 2010 at 1:58 AM
Lucifer said...: how do u do this?; March 17, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Arv said...: This is a technical classic :); March 17, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Pramoda Meduri said...: Hi Nanditha,

how r u gal??

am here after long time, and ur blog template is soooo cutee..liked it..:); March 17, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Tumblewords: said...: Awesome acrostic!; March 18, 2010 at 12:56 AM
The Write Girl said...: I enjoyed reading this. Very creative. Double acrostic and O.S.I are nicely written in one post!! 10 out of 10 : ); March 18, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Unknown said...: wonderful wordplay you !!!; March 18, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Mojo said...: Rolling high. What fun. I remember that high. Didn't last near long enough, but what a rush.; March 18, 2010 at 10:53 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: well crafted double acrostic :); March 19, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Maggie said...: This murmuring acrostic took me on quite a roller coaster ride.; March 19, 2010 at 7:23 PM
Americanising Desi said...: ufffffffff teri ada ;); March 28, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Tammie Lee said...: lovely way to write a poem, well done and so sweet.; March 29, 2010 at 11:58 PM
rainboy said...: first time here...
love the way u write,keep it up

tc; April 24, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Vintage Obsession said...: hey my first time here :) and i am liking it :) you sure have a way with your words :) will be back for your next post:); April 24, 2010 at 7:04 PM
erer said...: cool!! mushy too :P; April 24, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Absurdist said...: wow..... awesome one.... loved it man... loved yo blog...; April 28, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: @ Amity -

thank you dear:)...glad you liked it.:)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:29 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Americanising Desi -

he he...:)...thank u dear:)..love hearing from u always:)..take care; May 23, 2010 at 12:29 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Jim--

yep i sure had fun jim:)...thank u.. and yaa u got that right:); May 23, 2010 at 12:30 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @SandyCarlson-

thank you dear:); May 23, 2010 at 12:31 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Yvonne-

thank you dear:)...your say always are welcome:); May 23, 2010 at 12:31 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Creativity-

thank you dear:); May 23, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @PinkZz-

thank you dear:)..glad you liked it:); May 23, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Jaunty anima-

thank you dear:)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Ria-

sorry dear:)(...bit caught up with work and had a major writer's block :((...missing my space here..take care; May 23, 2010 at 12:34 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Rob-

thank u ,....glad you liked it; May 23, 2010 at 12:34 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Mayz-

he he...dont know...words flow:)...thank u:)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:35 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Arv -

thank u :)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:35 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Pramoda.-

hi dear:)...i'm fine ...thank u:)...i have been bit busy too:(...miss u all yaar...hope to come more often here.; May 23, 2010 at 12:36 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Tumblewords-

thank u dear:); May 23, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @The Write Girl -

thank u very much dear:)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @spottedwolf-

thank u :)...glad u enjoyed it.; May 23, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Mojo-

yep...:)...thank u:)...glad u liked it; May 23, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Leo-

thank u dear:)...; May 23, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Maggie-

wow...thank u:)...glad u enjoyed it:); May 23, 2010 at 12:39 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Americanising Desi-

shukreyaa....shukriya ji:); May 23, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Tammie Lee -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:); May 23, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @youdidwhaaat-

thank u:)...surely will see u soon:)..hope to see u more again...; May 23, 2010 at 12:42 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @rainboy-

thank u:)...glad u enjoyed ur stay:)...hope to see you more:)...take care:); May 23, 2010 at 12:42 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Vintage Obsession-

thank u:)...glad you liked it:)...enjoy ur stay; May 23, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @WarmSunshine-

thank u:); May 23, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @impuregod -

thank u:)...glad u liked it:); May 23, 2010 at 12:44 AM

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