Tuesday, March 16, 2010

MURMUR

Melodious rhythM
Undaunted love flU
Rising now fasteR
Me or is it hiM
Undoubtedly its yoU
Rolling high this love costeR

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52 comments:

Amity said...

Wow...what a heartfelt murmur!

I like this one and this is quite a challenge to write...where start end of line is an acrostic...:)

Nice!

Americanising Desi said...

yipieeeee you get me all excited babes!

Jim said...

This was a fun write wasn't it! Fun to read too. Me or Him? I think it is both.
On the last line I missed a meaning. Did you mean 'love coaster' like 'rollercoaster?'
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SandyCarlson said...

Intensely beautiful, warm, and fun!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Wonderful words and most cleverly written if I may say so.

Yvonne.

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Lines Dear :) :)

PinkZz said...

lovely acrostic :)

Jaunty anima said...

Now that gets me going!!
wow..u're so good with this!!

Ria said...

where r u these days?

Rob said...

Nicely done. Enjoyed this, thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse

Mayz said...

how do u do this?

Arv said...

This is a technical classic :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Nanditha,

how r u gal??

am here after long time, and ur blog template is soooo cutee..liked it..:)

Tumblewords: said...

Awesome acrostic!

The Write Girl said...

I enjoyed reading this. Very creative. Double acrostic and O.S.I are nicely written in one post!! 10 out of 10 : )

spottedwolf said...

wonderful wordplay you !!!

Mojo said...

Rolling high. What fun. I remember that high. Didn't last near long enough, but what a rush.

Leo said...

well crafted double acrostic :)

Maggie said...

This murmuring acrostic took me on quite a roller coaster ride.

Americanising Desi said...

ufffffffff teri ada ;)

Tammie Lee said...

lovely way to write a poem, well done and so sweet.

You Did Whaaat?! said...

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www.youdidwhaaat.blogspot.com :)

rainboy said...

first time here...
love the way u write,keep it up

tc

Vintage Obsession said...

hey my first time here :) and i am liking it :) you sure have a way with your words :) will be back for your next post:)

WarmSunshine said...

cool!! mushy too :P

impuregod said...

wow..... awesome one.... loved it man... loved yo blog...

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Amity -

thank you dear:)...glad you liked it.:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Americanising Desi -

he he...:)...thank u dear:)..love hearing from u always:)..take care

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jim--

yep i sure had fun jim:)...thank u.. and yaa u got that right:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@SandyCarlson-

thank you dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Yvonne-

thank you dear:)...your say always are welcome:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Creativity-

thank you dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@PinkZz-

thank you dear:)..glad you liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jaunty anima-

thank you dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Ria-

sorry dear:)(...bit caught up with work and had a major writer's block :((...missing my space here..take care

Yellow Tulip said...

@Rob-

thank u ,....glad you liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@Mayz-


he he...dont know...words flow:)...thank u:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Arv -


thank u :)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Pramoda.-

hi dear:)...i'm fine ...thank u:)...i have been bit busy too:(...miss u all yaar...hope to come more often here.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Tumblewords-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@The Write Girl -

thank u very much dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@spottedwolf-

thank u :)...glad u enjoyed it.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Mojo-

yep...:)...thank u:)...glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@Leo-

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Maggie-

wow...thank u:)...glad u enjoyed it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Americanising Desi-

shukreyaa....shukriya ji:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Tammie Lee -

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@youdidwhaaat-


thank u:)...surely will see u soon:)..hope to see u more again...

Yellow Tulip said...

@rainboy-

thank u:)...glad u enjoyed ur stay:)...hope to see you more:)...take care:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Vintage Obsession-

thank u:)...glad you liked it:)...enjoy ur stay

Yellow Tulip said...

@WarmSunshine-

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@impuregod -

thank u:)...glad u liked it:)

 
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