Sunday, March 7, 2010

Dream

A dream it was of
Hesitation to dream more
in cold winter sleep

Haiku Bones

One Single Impression

38 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the idea of the compounding dream that is a fine line between hesitation and procrastination!

Stan Ski said...

A nightmare? Or the best bit over?

Yellow Tulip said...

@Greyscale Territory -

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Stan Ski -

thankfully was woken up by the alarm before i cod analyze it further
!!...he he

Amity said...

And that hesitation would not want me to take another dare to sleep inspite of a beautiful cold winter sleep...:)

Beautiful dear! I miss yah!

I have an award for you, please claim it in my blog, that post preceding my hesitation post!

Hugs!

SandyCarlson said...

I like this. To dream of dreaming--or not.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Loved this! It's always so bizarre when you're dreaming about your dreaming. You captured it with just a few words.

SOL said...

I enjoyed this--hopefully it will be a warm spring sleep soon!

Americanising Desi said...

brevity is a soul of wit and you have it all!

Jim said...

Nice combo of prompts you have here. I havent done Haiku Bones yet today.
Your diagram of some 'hopeless heartaches' below is neat too.
Been missing you,
..

mia said...

beautiful & soothing as a lullaby.

Ria said...

written beautifully!! :)

adreamygal said...

Its wonderful ! the hestitation to dream on winter ..i guess it indirectly signifies the life - when cold winds of destiny blows , you are at dilemma to dream more , as it may be broken with tides ..

Mojo said...

This was a little dizzying... a dream within a dream. A fractal curve, or something like it.

Tumblewords: said...

Delightful!

Andrée said...

To dream of dreaming . . . I like the recursion. I can certainly understand the hesitation if it's cold. Wonderful poem.

Andree's OSI: Hesitation

spacedlaw said...

Lovely.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Simple and sweet. I think we all would rather stay in bed and dream.
Well done.


Melanie

PinkZz said...

cuto !

gabrielle said...

So tempting to burrow in, falling deeper and deeper into sleep.

Yellow Tulip said...

@Amity -

thank u dear:)...ur a sweetheart. take care:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Sweetest in the Gale -

yaa thank u dear:)...glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@SOL -

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Americanising Desi-

wow...thank u dear:)...muah

Yellow Tulip said...

@Jim-

thank u:)...missing here pretty often:(...sorry

Yellow Tulip said...

@mia -

thank u dear:)...

Yellow Tulip said...

@Ria-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it

Yellow Tulip said...

@adreamygal -

yaa exactly...its hard but still cant stop dreamin!!..its addictive

Yellow Tulip said...

@Mojo-

yaaa :)..somethin lik tat

Yellow Tulip said...

@Tumblewords-

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Andrée-

thank u dear:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@spacedlaw-

thank u:)

Yellow Tulip said...

@Melanie-

thank u dear

Yellow Tulip said...

@PinkZz -

thank u :)

Yellow Tulip said...

@gabrielle-

thank u dear:)

Nadege said...

winter nights produce such deep
sleeps and strange dreams -
a poem that is on target for me.

Yellow Tulip said...

@ Nagede-

thank you dear:)

 
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