My Heart's Rhyme: Dream

Sunday, March 7, 2010

Dream

A dream it was of
Hesitation to dream more
in cold winter sleep

Haiku Bones

One Single Impression

37 comments:

Gemma Wiseman said...: Love the idea of the compounding dream that is a fine line between hesitation and procrastination!; March 7, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Stan Ski said...: A nightmare? Or the best bit over?; March 7, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Greyscale Territory -

thank u dear:); March 7, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Stan Ski -

thankfully was woken up by the alarm before i cod analyze it further
!!...he he; March 7, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Amity said...: And that hesitation would not want me to take another dare to sleep inspite of a beautiful cold winter sleep...:)

Beautiful dear! I miss yah!

I have an award for you, please claim it in my blog, that post preceding my hesitation post!

Hugs!; March 7, 2010 at 12:16 PM
SandyCarlson said...: I like this. To dream of dreaming--or not.; March 7, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Sherri B. said...: Loved this! It's always so bizarre when you're dreaming about your dreaming. You captured it with just a few words.; March 7, 2010 at 7:02 PM
spiritsoflena said...: I enjoyed this--hopefully it will be a warm spring sleep soon!; March 7, 2010 at 8:44 PM
Americanising Desi said...: brevity is a soul of wit and you have it all!; March 7, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Jim said...: Nice combo of prompts you have here. I havent done Haiku Bones yet today.
Your diagram of some 'hopeless heartaches' below is neat too.
Been missing you,
..; March 8, 2010 at 3:25 AM
mia said...: beautiful & soothing as a lullaby.; March 8, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Rià said...: written beautifully!! :); March 8, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Anonymous said...: Its wonderful ! the hestitation to dream on winter ..i guess it indirectly signifies the life - when cold winds of destiny blows , you are at dilemma to dream more , as it may be broken with tides ..; March 8, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Mojo said...: This was a little dizzying... a dream within a dream. A fractal curve, or something like it.; March 9, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Tumblewords: said...: Delightful!; March 9, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Andree said...: To dream of dreaming . . . I like the recursion. I can certainly understand the hesitation if it's cold. Wonderful poem.

Andree's OSI: Hesitation; March 9, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Simple and sweet. I think we all would rather stay in bed and dream.
Well done.

Melanie; March 9, 2010 at 8:58 PM
PinkZz said...: cuto !; March 9, 2010 at 8:58 PM
gabrielle said...: So tempting to burrow in, falling deeper and deeper into sleep.; March 12, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Amity -

thank u dear:)...ur a sweetheart. take care:); March 16, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @SandyCarlson-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it; March 16, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @ Sweetest in the Gale -

yaa thank u dear:)...glad u liked it; March 16, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @SOL -

thank u dear:); March 16, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Americanising Desi-

wow...thank u dear:)...muah; March 16, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Jim-

thank u:)...missing here pretty often:(...sorry; March 16, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @mia -

thank u dear:)...; March 16, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Ria-

thank u dear:)...glad u liked it; March 16, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @adreamygal -

yaa exactly...its hard but still cant stop dreamin!!..its addictive; March 16, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Mojo-

yaaa :)..somethin lik tat; March 16, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Tumblewords-

thank u:); March 16, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Andrée-

thank u dear:); March 16, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @spacedlaw-

thank u:); March 16, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @Melanie-

thank u dear; March 16, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @PinkZz -

thank u :); March 16, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Yellow Tulip said...: @gabrielle-

thank u dear:); March 16, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Nadege said...: winter nights produce such deep
sleeps and strange dreams -
a poem that is on target for me.; April 2, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: @ Nagede-

thank you dear:); May 23, 2010 at 12:28 AM

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