Huh!!..I can live, it is true..
I can smile,..with or without you..
Hmmm!!.. I wish my broken heart's fix with a pinch of glue...
But here I'm still with a heavy heart all in blue...
Ohhh!!..My sweet angel, do send me some clue...
This love for you is spreading like flu..
Wow!!.. Your words like elixir's single dose..
Has now made time to completely froze..
Ahh!!..Your proximity like fragrance of rose..
Is soothing for even blistered nose..
ooch!!..don't oppose, it will be an eternal lose..
My dear this is our love song which I chose..
I can smile,..with or without you..
Hmmm!!.. I wish my broken heart's fix with a pinch of glue...
But here I'm still with a heavy heart all in blue...
Ohhh!!..My sweet angel, do send me some clue...
This love for you is spreading like flu..
Wow!!.. Your words like elixir's single dose..
Has now made time to completely froze..
Ahh!!..Your proximity like fragrance of rose..
Is soothing for even blistered nose..
ooch!!..don't oppose, it will be an eternal lose..
My dear this is our love song which I chose..
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27 comments:
How sweet this is!
Hi Nanditha,
very awesome one indeed..:).. liked it .. by the way, hw ru ? and wats up?
You bring out the essence of love! Very well written..
A pleasure to read.
Yvonne
sweet and lyrical.
hehehe...cute rhymin
Hi dear...
I have missed you...:)
Wow...this is such a lovely poem;
Ouchhh!!!....love is really a big puzzle;
Ahhhh....when can we learn a lesson;
Hmmmm....try and try no matter what;
Huh!!! is that really so?
Arggghhh...it pains really!
very very unique post my dear!
miss you in my place... :)
immersed in love :)
The sweet yearning of love...this was wonderful to read.
Gee, I wish I could write a gushy love poem. This is one for sure! I thought I would try but then ...
:)
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Huh!!! This one's sweet,it is true..
It cannot penned beautifully better than you..
Hmmm!!.. I wish I could carry it off with me with a pinch of glue..
And why are you staring these lines like.."OUT OF THE BLUE??":):)
Ohh!!.. My sweet friend,shall I give you some clue..
This admiration for you... Is certainly true..:):):)
Phew!!! Somehow managed a few lines.. But certainly a good work from you.. Keep it up :):)
Lovely sweet poem. I was never any good at rhyming.You do it so well.
Melanie
Nice one. "YOUR PROXIMITY LIKE FRAGRANCE OF ROSE ..IS SOOTHING FOR EVEN A BLISTERED NOSE.." this line made me smile :)
@ Tumblewords-
thank u dear:)
@ Pramoda-
thank u dear:)...i'm missing here offlate too much sorry dear:(..i'm fine hw about u?
@darklordreturns -
thank u dear:)
@Yvonne-
thank u dear:)..i'm very glad to here from u:)
@Nadege-
thank u dear:)
@Mayz-
yaa:)...thank u:)
@Amity-
wow..tat was fun:)..thank u dear:)...missing u too..hope to catch up with u soon:)..take care
@Arv -
thank u:)
@Sweetest in the Gale -
thank u dear:)..glad u liked it:)
@SandyCarlson-
thank u:)
@Jim-
thank u:)...
@Savyasachi-
lovely words :)...thank u:)...glad u enjoyed it:)
@Melanie-
aaaha...i'm flattered:)...thank u:)
@Shas-
enjoyed writing it too:)...he he...thank u dear:)
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